Beautiful story please update soon

I loved reading this fic! I love Lori, she’s a great character and I can tell you put a lot of thought into her backstory. Please update I would love to read more!

This story is awesome. I really love the characterization of Lori and love how you fit her into the story of the show. I'd love to see more from Katara and the Gaang's point of view, though.

This fanfic is so interesting can't wait for more.

This story is really great!:)

Awesome story! :)

Oh my god this story is so good :)

Ok, I love this fic.
Lori is such a fun and brutal character that she is a joy to read every single time she is on the screen(page?). I also love that you have a personality to Zuko's crew.

My only complaint is that there is not enough conflict with team Avatar because I want more siblings fighting to the death goddammit *slams fist on table* (ow...) and I am not really a fan of Jia and Jian.

Other then that great story and I hope to see this fic continue another 17 chapters

Update soon more of this great story please.

Pleeeease update. I need to know what happens next

I’ve always loved evil characters and I like how you’ve written Lori as kind of a psychotic rage monster at times. At other times she’s downright unsettling and i applause you because it’s hard to predict what she’ll do. Lori is also one of the few evil characters that I can’t wait to be redeemed because that’ll be really interesting as well as her water bending.

Oh man what a cliffhanger! I look forward to how Lori handles the room in her dress, as well as Zuko's reaction. Keep up the lovely work.

Great update

Alright, Lori is NUUUUUUUUUUTS, but she’s really funny tbh. And I love her interactions with Zuko. They really are good together.

great chapter looking forward to the next one!