| Reviews for A World Not Fit to Live In |
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BlueOrchid96 chapter 40 . 8/15 I don’t know if I can put into words my thoughts on this story. It was the ultimate roller coaster ride. Sometimes it was just too much and I had to put it down for a while, other times I was so furious, I literally wanted to hit something (or kill Draco.) There were tender moments as well before being jerked back into pain, disgust, and hatred. Then to find out that Draco was cursed and I was mad at myself for shedding tears for how Draco now felt about what the curse made him do. I warred with myself over the hate for Draco and the sorrow I now felt. While I am so happy that Hermione and Lucius can live happily ever after, I now wish Draco would have had a chance to play the part like Lucius, to be able to show his love for Hermione apart for Riddle, instead of being under the curse that forced such disgusting, evil things. I wonder if Hermione could have loved him back. Like I said, the ultimate roller coaster. You guys never let us down! So amazing and I thank you! |
Lachesis chapter 31 . 7/22 That’s it. Hermione is pregnant to Draco and I am out of here never to read anything by you two ever again. This has been the vilest, nastiest, most sadistic story I have read on here and I only kept at it because I was hoping for some joy for my OTP Lucius and Hermione and now I am not getting even that. I am disgusted and devastated. Well, may you rot. |
Honoria Granger chapter 18 . 7/22 The jig was up, not the gig was up. Lucius, having impeccable English table manners, would have first cut off a bite of steak. He would then have piled a bit of risotto on the back of his fork, atop the meat, mashing it down a bit with his knife, and then put it in his aristocratic mouth. Because that’s how Brits eat. |
Honoria Granger chapter 17 . 7/22 A vial of potion, not a vile of potion. A butter pat, not a butter pad. If he picks up the soup bowl with both hands, how does he then use a spoon to feed her? |
Honoria Granger chapter 14 . 7/22 Bass line. Baselines are in baseball. |
Honoria Granger chapter 12 . 7/22 Chaise longue, not chaise lounge. |
Honoria Granger chapter 11 . 7/22 Twirling a forkful of spaghetti in your spoon is very bad manners. Good form is simply grounding your fork on the bottom of your pasta plate and then winding a few strands of spaghetti neatly on your fork, as Italians do. Just sayin’. And your piano knowledge is refreshing. |
Guest chapter 40 . 6/21 Owwww... Why Draco must die... Can't accept he is dead. I have hope that they'll get their happy ending together. Make them polyandry if must. But it's okay because lumione get their happy ending. Thx, for sharing I really appreciate it. |
Alyse U chapter 22 . 6/18 It broke my heart when she sang Time to Say Goodbye. Lovely scene. I can see all of the scenes so vividly and feel the emotions vividly in this story. Beautiful. I love how Lucius secretly listens to her play. |
Alyse U chapter 40 . 6/17 Oh i do love a good happy ending! I rate this fanfic 12 out of 10. Spectacular, sexy, sweet, sad, bittersweet, romantic, and so many other adjectives can describe this fanfic. I absolutely loved it. Im a sucker for lumione and sevmione but i really liked Sinevra/Sinny/Ginevrus?. Anywho, thank you so much for putting the time, effort, and emotion into this fic. I found it compelling, heartbreaking, heartwarming, funny, and very very sexy. The ending was perfect. I was not expecting Harry's wife lol. I love how every plot point was built up and then tied up at the end. This story had me since chapter one! I'm so glad I stuck it through. Wonderful work! :) |
Alyse U chapter 39 . 6/17 Yes! (Fistbumps the air) I love that he wanted to court her. I also loved the closing lines with the elves. Tinny's my fav character. :) |
Alyse U chapter 38 . 6/17 Ah there it is. I almost forgot about the prophecy. I suppose Draco wouldn't have to suffer seeing the girl he loved with his father and having to live with what he did to the people he loved. But still, I wish they could have eventually moved on and come to be friends. *tears* |
Alyse U chapter 37 . 6/17 I honestly feel so bad for Draco. I hope that he and Hermione can be friends and that she'll come to love him too. |
Lady Reese Kightkens chapter 40 . 5/25 Oh sweet mercy, this was a wild ride that I could not put it down! I don't usually go for a triad type of story, but this one was definitely different. It was so terrifying and miserable to watch Hermione suffer, but the relationship she built with Lucius just kept me going. I really didn't think that she'd fall for either of them in the beginning when they were so cruel, but I love how you worked in the gradual change in Lucius. The twist of Draco's curse that made him act so evil caught me so off guard, but I'm still so glad she ended up with Lucius. I feel like they definitely had a better connection through the story and it was more realistic that she fell for him. And the whole relationship between Severus and Ginny was also really lovely as well. All in all, I was hooked on this story. I do wish it had been a story of just her and Lucius without Draco to cause problems, but I do how crucial it was to the story. Good job on this and thanks for sharing! |
PBinks chapter 23 . 5/24 Another brutal and heartbreaking chapter. I had to take a break from reading this for a little while. I needed something fluffy and happy to balance the scales of the perpetual angst this story provides. In case you don’t know, that’s a compliment. I’ve never had a story affect me as much as this one. |