Reviews for What if they hear us?
carrotcakeo5 chapter 1 . 10/25/2019
This was great! The ending is a bit confusing but I still really enjoyed it
Ushindeshi chapter 1 . 9/25/2019
Great story. Lucy can be just as mischievous as Natsu sometimes.
moeruhoshi chapter 1 . 8/3/2018
i love Lucys behavior! i wish more stories made her so provocative cx Natsu cant resist!
Godschildtweety chapter 1 . 7/4/2018
Nice
Alley McNally chapter 1 . 5/26/2018
Darn. It was just getting to the good part! I wanted to see them do it again and again! Oh well, it was good as is. Good work!
Guest chapter 1 . 5/25/2018
More chapters please
mushi9 chapter 1 . 5/25/2018
Incredible oneshot! ! ! ! I really enjoyed how fluid they were with each other. You could see how much love they have between them. Great job, and awesome smut!
ScarletRuins chapter 1 . 5/23/2018
This turned out a lot better than I thought it would, tbh. I absolutely loved it, a story based of this or continued from this would be amazing. But one can only hope. Still, 10/10!
susan.miles.311 chapter 1 . 5/23/2018
I loved this one shot story. I was wondering if you continue this story. I want to know what happens next.
Leomae 2.0 chapter 1 . 5/23/2018
This is being left as a guest cuz is being stupid and won’t let me login. Anyway! I enjoyed this though it was a little difficult to keep track of the spoken parts since you didn’t use double quotations. That being said I would love a continuation!