You are doing a great job of this so far, little mistakes here and there, but still a great job.
I'll see you in the next update!

i like it :) I hope you post the next chapter soon

I really like this story so far :)

The story is great but your updates are too slow.
Please update fast because one year time skip is a lot

Great update!

Very happy to see

a new chapter.

It was a good

one.

While I would of

loved for Oliver

to go with

Kara,in your story

it made sense for why

he didn't.

Can't wait to see

them back together

though.

Glad you're continuing

this fic.

Yes thank you for not having J’onn disarm the DEO. How can you have confidence in your leadership if they don’t give you every tool available to get the job done and be able to come home to your family. That includes both lethal and nonlethal options. I’m sure DEO agents would feel much like I do. I own a gun for self-defense but I’ve never had to pull it and I hope I never do. I hope it just remains an expensive paperweight that I wear on my hip. But I would rather have it and not need it then need it and not have it. (can’t put it on chapter 16 said I reached the reply limit for that chapter Ha ha ha.)

Glad you're back and I cant wait to see what's next

Yay! New chapter! I really like your story.

Very nice.

Congratulations on your job! I'm so happy you are back, and I'm very grateful you did not abandon this story. Your update made my day! I definitely am still reading and looking forward to your stories.

I completely agree with you on the Supergirl episode's poor handling of the gun control debate in the context of the DEO. If the aliens the DEO encounters on a daily basis are attacking the DEO agents using lethal means, then the DEO agents should have lethal means available to them in case their non-lethal weapons are insufficient. I enjoy when authors are able to fix the mistakes/poor choices of canon like you did here. This outcome is much more logical.

I'm glad Oliver knocked some sense into J'onn. I enjoyed Oliver's thoughts/self-introspection about what makes him a good leader. Given how hard Oliver trains his recruits before he lets them out on the street, he absolutely wants to make sure they are armed with all of the skills and weapons necessary for them to survive.

I love how well-integrated Evelyn is now into the team. She has come so far since the beginning of this story.

Do you accept prompts? If yes, since Father's Day is coming up soon (at least where I live): would you be willing to write a family scene of Evelyn and William surprising Oliver for Father's Day with something? Bonus points if Kara is back from Argo ;) I would also love to see Thea! What are Thea and Roy up to now?

Can't wait for the next chapter!

VERY GOOD.
MORE.
MORE OLIVER AND EVELYN, PLEASE.

I've really enjoyed your story glad you're back

well this was pretty good here

Don't worry, I'm still reading this! Can't wait for the next chapter.