Reviews for A Story Unfolds: His Heart
alia00 chapter 4 . 12/31/2018
It's very nice, thank you
KiaKia82 chapter 4 . 11/3/2018
first dad!mycroft story i read and its great. i love how you portrayed the father and daughter relationship, especially the unseen side of mycroft. how he loved his wife, how doting he is as a father.. i swear my heart melted in that flashback.. cant wait for your next update~ thank you for sharing this story
CharmiaArkenstone chapter 4 . 9/28/2018
Holy fluff what an ending! Great work ma friend, I loved the flashback it was so sweet and a nice balance to the darker themes prevailing in the rest of the chapter.

Also...how dare you become active and not swing by to chat girlie :P But honestly, hope to hear from you soon :) xx
CharmiaArkenstone chapter 3 . 7/19/2018
Great chapter. Honestly dad!Mycroft is still sinking in and I love that you've kept the character's idiosyncrasies together.

Let me know you're still alive dude! You've been missing a lot!
CharmiaArkenstone chapter 2 . 7/19/2018
I love Sherlock and this was so good to read cos I could just picture all their faces/reactions/tones in my mind. Still can't believe they killed Mary off though.
CharmiaArkenstone chapter 1 . 7/19/2018
Hey dude, loved this! I know it's exactly what it's like when you get inspiration that you can't shake off!
ThatInvisibleGirrl chapter 3 . 6/22/2018
I like it. Its quite interesting, Mycroft reproducing.
chibitamaora chapter 1 . 5/23/2018
I need more... please o.o
SoiledAngelWings chapter 1 . 5/23/2018
More please...