| Reviews for A Story Unfolds: His Heart |
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alia00 chapter 4 . 12/31/2018 It's very nice, thank you |
KiaKia82 chapter 4 . 11/3/2018 first dad!mycroft story i read and its great. i love how you portrayed the father and daughter relationship, especially the unseen side of mycroft. how he loved his wife, how doting he is as a father.. i swear my heart melted in that flashback.. cant wait for your next update~ thank you for sharing this story |
CharmiaArkenstone chapter 4 . 9/28/2018 Holy fluff what an ending! Great work ma friend, I loved the flashback it was so sweet and a nice balance to the darker themes prevailing in the rest of the chapter. Also...how dare you become active and not swing by to chat girlie :P But honestly, hope to hear from you soon :) xx |
CharmiaArkenstone chapter 3 . 7/19/2018 Great chapter. Honestly dad!Mycroft is still sinking in and I love that you've kept the character's idiosyncrasies together. Let me know you're still alive dude! You've been missing a lot! |
CharmiaArkenstone chapter 2 . 7/19/2018 I love Sherlock and this was so good to read cos I could just picture all their faces/reactions/tones in my mind. Still can't believe they killed Mary off though. |
CharmiaArkenstone chapter 1 . 7/19/2018 Hey dude, loved this! I know it's exactly what it's like when you get inspiration that you can't shake off! |
ThatInvisibleGirrl chapter 3 . 6/22/2018 I like it. Its quite interesting, Mycroft reproducing. |
chibitamaora chapter 1 . 5/23/2018 I need more... please o.o |
SoiledAngelWings chapter 1 . 5/23/2018 More please... |