Cute chapter, had some fluff, a minor offset (with Flaky's shyness toward nudity after being married while probably already having an experience with having sex), but that's a small point compared to the whole chapter so...not important

As for a group activity, maybe it's Christmas and they have a party (or get- together) to exchange gifts. Or they go to the beach, swim, go to arcade, and eat and get their face painted on the broadwalk. Or go to a classic place...the amusement park/carnival (just throwing things out there)

Dude oml i love these so much! Their all so cute! Im glad to see theirs still a fanfiction running on this ship, theres really not so much lately

Yay Flippy (and Flipqy) is going to be a dad . I really hope it's a boy, just so Flippy could have that father/son bonding experience

As for suggestions: I would love to see Flipqy at his lowest moment (since you alluded to him being suicide) and see how he overcomes this with Flaky. Even though it could get heavy in the 'feels' department, I feel like this would not only be a good way for them to better understand each other's insecurities, but this would strengthen their relationship (if done right)

Good Job. Like this one.

I liked the playfulness of it, where Flipqy is making chessy jokes and the hide and seek part...you know what (side- bar) this is the first time in a story (that I read) where Flipqy is playing hide and seek and it doesn't include him trying to murder Flaky, or Flaky isn't legit scared for life (this is weird, but refreshing)

I will say that in the beginning you start a paragraph stating that she has sensitive quills, but immediately talk about how she is sensitive "about" her quills instead of talking about why her quills are sensitive (in the same paragraph). But that is something small and easy to overlook, so nice job

P.S. I like Olive. She seems adorable, but how old is she? I thought she was a little kid but then you said she might be one of Cuddles' sisters. And if that's the case, that makes me presume that she is a little older (at least in her teens)

Oh more mini stories...*reads chapter*... I hate Becky and all that she is. She frustrates me to no end, and not just because she's your typical bully, no. Her character and everything she says makes no sense

First, there is the moment she says "You're stealing Chareesa's man" then right after that she says "Flippy is your boyfriend, correct" What? But you just said...You just said that Flippy is your friend's man

Then there's the fact that she's threatening Flaky to stop dating him and have him talk and date Chareesa when they have been dating for years. This would be good if they were in highschool and they just started to show deeper feelings for each other, but they are out of highschool. You're kinda late to be breaking up a relationship, honey

Finally, the straw that broke the camel's back, "If you tell Chareesa what I'm doing for her, I will not only kill you, but I'll kill Flippy too" ... Excuse me, what? Not only did this female threaten Flaky and Flippy's lives (which by the way, outside of highschool, she would have had the cops called on her; especially after seeing that physical assault on tape) but...get this...she is going to murder the guy that Chareesa supposingly deserves. Remember? The friend you are doing this for. You will kill the person she likes...What the heck kind of logic is this?!

Obviously, this blue bear is out of her mind, but her motives are infuriating; especially when you remember that they are not in highschool. Really "Popularity"? "Fangirl"ing"? Ahhh! And then she had the nerve to show up at his house all evil-like, b**** either cops are going to be called or you are going to be catching Flipqy's hands because out of anybody you could have chose, Flipqy is not a person to be messed with. (Which is why I find it weird to even have a bully arc while Flipqy is present)

But I digress, I'm used to typical bully arcs and I understand how they run, however Becky was infuriating in a good way and in a bad way. Sure, bullies are supposed to be bad, but when you take this out of a highschool setting, it seems childish of the character, and even more so psychotic and unstable of Becky to be confusing her motives like that. She needs to be put down, or as you put it, burn in a fire

This chapter left me surprised. And more because I am aware that in real life things like that come to happen either with girls or boys. But I was left with a doubt, that was Becky?

So this is going to be a bunch of mini stories...interesting

I like what you did with this chapter; showing some backstory. Then the suicide element had me on the edge of seat (glad he's ok)...however questions

1) How old are they? Just curious, because it feels like highschool, however he already went to war? I wanted to say they were in their 20s at this point because they don't mention homework and they're working, but he says that Cuddles and Toothy are teens?

2) Flipqy's personality... I understand him turning away from killing people because he wanted to better himself, but when he said that one line "why did I like doing it anyway", this feels out of place. He treats killing like ice cream (or some other former favorite food), when hurting others to that extent is more like an addiction than a preference. And just like cigarettes (or any other drugs), when you quit, you don't look back saying "ha, why did I even like this". You know why. You liked the sensation, you loved how it made you feel. And when he was covered in blood, I expected him to have that urge again or relapse (but still fight against it), not act scared (unless he was scared of himself and what he might do). Plus, he's been to war, that's how Flipqy was formed. He shouldn't be taking no mess. If anything, being scared is something Flippy would do. Not because he's weak, but because he's the moral compass between the two. He would be shaking, thinking to himself that he's not that evil person anymore while Flipqy is slipping in sanity whether he should kill them or not...but that's just me

Speaking of sanity, nice touch with him hearing voices. Normally, it would be Flippy hearing voices (which would wind up being Flipqy talking to him anyway), but I never thought of Flipqy hearing voices and what it must be like

As for suggestions, what about if Flipqy tried to assist Flaky with getting gum out of her hair. You mentioned her having sensitive quills so if he does it correctly and brushes her quills afterwards (to fix it up), it might lead to something ( I know this is a quirky idea but I just went with my first idea)

P.S. (Just in case you feel upset about my last two comments) I'm not saying these things to discourage you or make you feel less as a writer. I says these things because I like you stories and I can't wait to see the next chapter

I'm glad you wanted to continue this, but questions. I have so many questions...nah just two

1) Someone just came into the house saying there was a dangerous people after them and no one is worried? Sure, they show brief concerns but no one calls the police or locks the slammed door? How did a make out session make everyone forget the potential danger still about? ... I know this was suppose to be one of those funny "cock block" moments, but the humor kinda diminishes when people's lives are in danger

2) How long have they been dating that by the time they're married (for two months) they are still acting like they're dating? I'm not talking about taking each other out for dinner, pet names, or acting cutesy around each other, but by the time you get married and spend every waking moment with someone, there should be some form familiarity towards each other...case and point, Flaky's shyness. Sure, that's her trait, but after a while she should get used to intimacy, right?

Other than that, glad to see things are looking great for them

Oh, it's interesting that you've decided to continue this with more chapters. And I'm glad to see that there are certain references to Sniffles x Nutty.

I liked how Flipqy was portrayed in this chapter. While Flippy & Flaky was basically establishing love between each other. Flipqy & Flaky's relationship was more about getting to know each other better, knowing boundaries, and knowing what's "gross" to the other. It's wasn't your typical hot and wild sessions that you see with Flipqy & Flaky stories, but more like a learning experience on what works and what doesn't. And since he still retained his "wild" traits, that's a check plus in my book.
(Plus I wonder in this "learning process" if he's going to discover how sensitive her quills are)

Just like the old saying goes, "You are never too old (or young) to learn something new". And today I've learned that the word "mammary" exist. (Seriously I've never heard of that word before)

P.S. Good job on your first chapter. Can't wait for the next one

Interesting fic, I loved it. Out of curiosity, when you finish this fic you have not planned on writing a lemon for another couple.