Man, you keep me on the edge of my seat with this story!
Daphne and Harry better get resolved next chapter!

This is what I thought this story was going to be all about. I don’t care if the whole thing was a cock tease, I enjoyed it. Damaged people finding each other and being maneuvered to find happiness or security is great.

I don’t understand what that whole wand showdown scene was supposed to portray.

Well, an associate recommended this fic.

I was wondering why and could see bits and pieces of something behind the rebuilding of hogwarts and the political world building for Harry.

I’m a Luna fanboy, and her introduction into the story was the strongest of all the girls. Hermione has the most realistic. Daph has the sexiest. But it’s like you drop a scene and then just move into a gen type fic.

And I had forgotten how this story even began with that interaction between hermione and daph. And this story has gone down paths and come back.

I’m this far in and will see where this lands.

I spent a couple days binge reading this. Truly enjoyable read so far, but nothing warranting the M rating, yet.

I wanna like this, I do, but I am just struggling with it. You keep putting Harry down, in a subtle way, as it seems that every mistake he makes is spotlighted by everyone while people ignore whatever mistakes they make in regards to him. Like the Neville and Luna scene in chapter 25, I get why they would be upset, but he literally stabbed Harry in the ass. I mean, you’ve been showing them all as war hardened veterans with itchy trigger fingers, and Harry gets stabbed, and just whines about it. If he truly was suffering PTSD, he probably would have blasted Neville through a wall. Hell, Hermione should have been tossing curses the moment she thought it was the Sword of Gryffindor. Yet, a paragraph later Harry is groveling for forgiveness. Every chapter seems to be Harry apologizing for mistakes that aren’t really mistakes. Like him questioning Narcissa on her motives? I would have called him an idiot if he didn’t. There is always a way around an oath, and she was definitely on the Dark side in the war, and you made it this huge insult that he would ever question her. It just didn’t make sense. I don’t know, I just really don’t like your characterization of Harry. Everyone else seems to be growing more confident, and smarter, while Harry is just bumbling around from one lecture to another. I am still going to give this a follow though, on the off chance that Harry grows a spine and stops apologizing every other chapter.

I had to Google to learn what a hair wrap looked like.
Yum! for those exotic qulls and coloured inks.
Yum! at the sound of that ring with the black diamonds on the band and either side of the diamond mounted on a diamond.
AW! at the mental pic I just got of little Teddy Lupin's colour coordinating his hair with the colours of his new plushies.
You meant "the girls' hands".
AW! Neville and Harry were cute, with their shorthand and manly chortles.
I did not know house elves could remove the alcohol from drinks.
I loved Luna's reaction to the duck-billed platypus.
I covet, with every fibre of my nonmagical being, Susan's whistling skills.
You meant "statue's mouth".

One more question that need aswer . If dumbledore wasnt able to speak parseltounge then how ron did it ? Or the enchament on the sink were broken by dumbledore and any sound to the sink will open it ?

Aaaaand Daph-Daph loses her cool! Ya gotta love it; Harry J breaks AAAAALLL the rules!

Did you mean for Daphne to say "get their new Houses accustomed to them".
Yum! at the contents of that light English breakfast that Tilitsy cooked Harry.
I adore the sound of Harry's quilted overshirt.

But you love emo angst. You also make pull my hair and want scream at fictional people. Good writing. But please don't drag it out to long. My blood pressure can't take it.

You say as close to canon as possible then make Harry out to be weaker then Hermione. Bitch please you must have a mental disease

Did you mean to write "Voldemort dying"?
Did you mean "convicted Death Eaters"?
Did you mean "the Potter-Blacks had"?
Did you mean for Harry to tell the Wizengamot members about "Ministry controlled Dementors"?
Did you mean for Madam Longbottom to say "Most Ancient and Most Noble Houses"?
Did you mean to write "whom the Black Sisters"?
Did you mean "Chief Witch's gavel"?
Did you mean "their respective houses"?
Did you mean for Harry to say "attending the Rites"?
"retrace" should be one word.
Did you mean for Harry to say "parvenus"?

Not gonna lie, the bit with Luna and Neville actually completely took me out of the story. It was somewhat amusing, but it just felt so out of place. I'm probably just going to need to pretend it didn't happen to feel like I can get back into the flow of the plot. I feel like it would have worked better as a 'deleted scene' of some sort.

Um, there are professional Quidditch pitches for the professional teams. Why is Ron acting like he needs to figure out how to create a pitch from scratch? Wizards managed to create other pitches and they can't all be as old as Hogwart's. There's got to be construction professionals out there somewhere he can go to as a resource.