I need moree

Wow! This is so cool, I think I'm in love with your plot. Truly spectacular, hope to read more soon.

It was a good chapter, I will look forward to the next update!

Thank you! I really like reading this, you have made my day. If You Keep Writing then I’ll Keep Reading!

Yes, yes, yes! This story is awesome! Nice touch on giving Sayuri secondary Cloud flames. There's a certain charm to Cloudy Skies, but that's my opinion. Can't wait to read more! Thank you for making this story!

I love this so much

Absolutely amazing! Can’t wait for more! I love Reborn and Sayuri interactions, but maybe I’m a bit biased considering Reborn is my favorite KHR character. Oh, well;) Thanks for the great read, you helped make me happy today.

Keep Writing and I’ll Keep Reading!

Thank you for this awesome read. Can’t wait for the next chapter!

Keep Writing and I’ll Keep Reading!

Obs : realmente, você não precisa fazer o emparelhamento RebornXOC caso meu comentário anterior estiver dando a impressão de que 'Eu só vou gostar dessa fic, se tiver esse emparelhamento', realmente, há poucas fics de emparelhamento que eu gosto.

Sinceramente estou amando.
Eu geralmente não gosto de quando tem emparelhamento já que a personalidade do OC vai de uma para outra quando entra em um relacionamento.
Mas sua história está se desenvolvendo bem, tanto que realmente estou querendo um RebornXOC, mesmo que um pouquinho preocupado que a personalidade vá dessa para uma totalmente oposta, doce e essas merdas, que geralmente acontecem na maioria das fics que li.
Se tiver esse emparelhamento, espero que a personalidade dela continue a mesma.

Bom trabalho e obrigado pelo capítulo

I really like this, can’t wait for more.

This is great! Can’t wait for more!

! MORE ! PLEASE ! I LOVE IT !

Please continue! This is a very unique plot and I can't wait for more.

I really like Sayuri! and Tsuna's observations of her is great! Thas shows that he isn't that oblivious. Nana is good too!
But I do wonder how his grades are doing if he had Sayuri to teach him, and the whole "dame tsuna" thing? I don't think it would exist with how protective Sayuri is.
I liked the part leading up to her blowing up on Dino, It was fantastic!
And if she finds out Iemitsu was even thinking about about setting her up with Xanxus there will be a few huge explosions I'm sure.
I wonder if her shifu is actually Fon? in that case, wouldn't she know about I-pin? or maybe her master was another person from the Hibaris... hmmmm
Also, I really look forward to her talk with Reborn. And to find out if the rest of the arcobaleno will become her elements, and how that will affect the whole battles of the rainbow if we're even going to get that far..
Anyway, Thanks for writing this! I had fun reading it!
p.s: how old exactly is Sayuri? in her twenties?