Good Chapter!

I thought this was great. And meeting the ME Universe is just funny so far. I hope you are still updating.

This could be better.

Great story keep it up!

Hope you still plan on continuing this. Was a fun read.

After reading the first chapter, I kept on going until I hit the latest chapter. All I can say is this one hell of an addicting read and I sure hope you plan on updating this in the future even if the promised update is long overdue. I wish the author good health and god speed my good man.

It's already August?

MOAR

I think you should include the Space Marines because you know how badass they are:)

its 10 days now since the appointed update...

are you okay.?

just found these and i am loving it. though i am usually against Revamping ME. I will keep to myself until i read what you write.

in all honesty... i dont want the revamp. BUT! But, as long as its just the numbers and not the ship strength and techs. then i am fine with it.

last note: 1 percent of the galaxy is in fact, pretty damn BIG. so yeah. as long as its numbers and not strength. it is FINE.

good luck! :D

Like what you did for the Quarians. And also it's agreeable to beef em up in terms of numbers as you said space is big. I really love and hate the Mass Effect franchise, one factor is their freaking guns because yeah ammo for days but overpenetrates which if our modern guns are beef up they would still do more damage to people than ME guns. There's are reason hollow point rounds are deemed illegal. Really love you're fic which revolve aound the concept of your imperium traveling throughout franchises to help out humanity. Thumbs up to that! Really like how he will affect different universes and like what you did with Haloverse. Looking forward to the next one.

Question though. What is their armor look like in their visit to SA? is it like WH40k style PA? Archaic looking but a marvel tech?

Really like the sass the Commodore has for the Overseer, it makes and help him to feel normal like that.

Great story. What about the Librarian and the guardians?

Here are some ideas for their next destination:

StarCraft - They arrive just in time to save Kerrigan from being captured by the Zerg.
Stargate SG1/Atlantis - They arrive in season 10 and fight the Ori. Or they appear in the Pegasus galaxy when the Ancients were fighting the Wraith.
Mass Effect - Before the First Contact War. SA develop different technology from mass effect tech.
Babylon 5 - During the Minbari-Human war.
Battlestar Galactica - an AU where the Cylons never attacked the Colonies. The Colonials attack the Imperium for having AIs, not following their religion, and because of the Overseer claiming to be a higher being but not a Lord of Kobol.
Voltron Legendary Defender - when in the series is up to you.
Gundam series - when in the series is up to you.

I would have thought the overseer would have had something to say about how the Spartan II's came to be.

Very good! I hope you'll keep writing.