I love it plz continue ur stories plz. Update as soon as u can plz. Later Days _

Hey sorry it took me SO long to review! I'm glad you told me you updated! I JUST LOVE THE HEAD COLLECTING LADY. Ah geesh! It's Mayline you moron. Go do something else while I try to leave a INTELIGENT review. Can I play with the swords? Yes, just leave me alone. Yeah! *runs off* As I was saying very good chapter! I can't wait to find out more about Mayline so you better not take a year to update again! Wait... did I tell my other half she could play with the swords? *Looks over and see Outer Zig-zag juggling unsheahted swords.* AH! DON'T DO THAT! I SWEAR IF YOU KILL US I'M GOING TO HAUNT YOU! BUW HA HA HA!

UPDATE PLEASE! THis story is really good.

UP DATE OR ILL HUNT U DOWN AND KILL YOU! ! sorry i'm so viollent but that was an evil cliff hanger.

Great chapter. I really like it. Hope you update soon.

Ja ne

Just thought I'll let you know that I am reading it might take me awhile to get done but so far its good! *Psst!* I make up a character for each show that I watch too! Except I carry over characters into a couple shows. *Smirk*

Halo! I like your story alot. Your right, Hiei was OOC in that chapter. But it was still very good, and if it fits in with the story then its alright. :) Keep up the good work, even though you haven't updated in awhile...why not? Hrm...update soon alright? Everyone is waiting! :)

HIYA! You gotta a great fic goin' on here! VERY NICE! Did ya' notice that I seem slighty psychotic? That's cause' I AM! I LIKE CAPITAL LETTERS, WHE!

Hiei: You really scare me, you know.

Bunni: (*Laughing like a maniac*) I KNOW! (*Disappears*)

Hiei: Thank Enma, she's gone, finally!

Bunni: (*In a chicken suit*) I am the talking chicken!

Hiei: .'' Actually, you're Bunni in a chicken suit.

Bunni: Oh,I get it, you have a problem with me cause I'm a talking chicken, don't 'cha?

Hiei: Huh?

Bunni: I'll have you know that I have built a firm foundation for being a talking chicken! But there are people in this world who do not understand me for being a talking chicken... RACIST PIG!

Hiei: *~* ...

I like your story... SO HURRY UP WID THE NEXT CHAPY! Please? You would make me cry if you didn't! Anywayz, CONTINUE!

BUH-BYE .~

That was great! Don't stop now. Keep up the good work. I hope to see more chapters good on writing fanfics. I can't wait to see the next chapter.

Please hurry up with the next, pleases... NOW DAMMIT!

BUH-BYE .~

o Good Story! Keep up wit the good work..

Hi! i just wanted to say that its great but you might want to clear up a few things: Mayline and Lina, just who are they? and how in heck could Hiei be captured? somethings aren't making much sense but i think its okay so far. no flames at this point! Schroder

Skully: I like it!

Spike: Good job!

Shroomy: Unlike other assholes how flame cuz they don't like small details...we find nothing wrong.

Skully: We don't really care or nothing we're jsut happy to find a good story.

Spike: keep up the Good work!

Shroomy: This story is interesting!

Spike: YUP! .

SKully: Keep it up.