I really hope you continue and finish this story has been enjoying it so far :-)

I like that trust is not there immediately- more realistic. But it’ll be interesting to see how they get it back :)

Okay okay. Gonna be interesting if the Avengers can clear her head about what’s going on. Kind of interesting that Sakura doesn’t flinch over harming a civilian when she hasn’t been brainwashed.

Sweet baby, Sakura, you can NOT. But the setup is amazing :D and I am looking forward to the conflict!

I don’t at all think your take on these characters are wildly OOC! I have actually been hesitating to read this bc I have been saving it for a rainy day. But here we are in a pandemic and (hoping you are well) it seemed appropriate to start it :D. Can’t wait to see where you go from here!

Please continue. Your story is great

Hi, I don’t comment on stories often, but when they are really well written or are great and creative ideas I just gotta show some love, and I love this, I really do! I love how you explain others POV and you are spot on with the reasoning and characters, a true talent. I really love how (I’m not sure if this was intentional or not or if I’m reading things wrong but) Sakura doesn’t speak much. Shes silent and looks harmless so others would most likely not notice her. She thinks before she speaks—unless she’s angry, which is totally believable.

I like how you are developing the relationships between everyone and and how you are showing obvious development and their interactions with one another; they want her to speak when she’s nervous. I like how you include Sakura into the story, like when you made the death about her, and how the lines of the movie will find a way to include her, it’s honestly artful with how you were able to accomplish that. Nice job, you got skills.

To be honest, I felt like there was something to be desired in her fight with the Hulk. I expected more speed, more kicks, more chops, yelling and cursing (Shannaro!) and more punches to the face (sense, like, I’ve always want to see the hulk and Sakura fight). I wanted Sakura to show what she could do, so the others would know not to underestimate her, or try to berate her and think she’s weak. Don’t get me wrong, the fight scene was great and you managed to make me feel excited, you got my adrenaline running while picture in this fight. Your talent managed to make me feel something, from reading, which is honestly magnificent. But I’ve come to the realization, or I half forgot and then suddenly remembered that Sakura had amnesia. I assumed that she knew all her techniques and all her moves (since she remembered that she was a fighter), I forgot that she still learning what she can do (I had this thought when she discovered that she was also a healer). To be honest, I think this makes the story even better. Since you said you were planning to go all the way to endgame there’s going to be tons of arcs for Sakura to discover herself and what she can do. It might be boring if she showed all her moves in the beginning and kept using the same techniques throughout the story. It would be more interesting when she rediscovers her techniques down the line, that way she could still surprise everyone.

It would be awesome if she learned some new techniques as well, from being around new things and cultures that will inspire her to create new jutsu, like a jackhammer jutsu or something. Or she could just train in things that she wasn’t a master at before, so she can get stronger and grow with them (like train in genjutsu or ninjutsu—some versions of Sakura don’t know elemental jutsu, so you can have her train in that, or be a version of Sakura that already knows a good amount of ninjutsu—your choice). Genjutsu on them would be amazing, since they are not trained to use chakra nor is the world used to it, they would not be able to disperse it with chakra—maybe pain tho. She can use the swap jutsu, body flicker, clone and transformation jutsu! How cool would it be for her to hide or spy as a fly?! It’s so ninja like, lol! How about swimming through the ground as if it were water? Or actually walking on water! Tony would flip, lmao! (I do hope she remembers the way of the ninja and how they don’t like to explain how they use their techniques, because information the most important tool in that world, and it is in a ninjas nature to not give it out so freely) you could even add something crazy in here, maybe she knows the Rasengan! Like, she could see a swirling blue ball, have a memory, and try to replicate what she remembers because she likes to attach to her memories. The rasengan would Subconsciously remind her of one of her boys and she could end up using that technique often. You could honestly add something crazy like this or whatever your beautiful mind decides to cook up, I’m just spouting ideas.

I just wanted to give you some ideas just in case you were feeling a little burnt out or didn’t know where to go or something. I’m willing to give you more if you want and I do hope you come back soon because this is a really good story.

Anyways, I got to get some sleep since I binged this story in one night and it’s now eight in the morning... Luckily it’s spring break though. Of course I’m following and this is going to my favorite lists so that I will know when you decide to start cooking up your beautiful ideas again, I’ll wait for something as awesome as this.

—Dog

I like this story, hope you continue to update soon

‘Hates how colorful these motherfuckers are’

This is soooooooo good! I can’t wait for the next chapter and hopefully we might get to see some Steve x Sakura time soon . Thank you for making such a good story!

It is pretty good

This story is amazing, can’t wait for more️

Dear writer, please update

Damn, this was awesome! So glad you're continuing this story!

I LOVE THIS! I really hope you finish soon!