Reviews for Navy
Krionik chapter 3 . 2/6
Here's hoping this gets continued at some point. Ciel is (irrationally) one of my favorite characters, and she's criminally underused in fanfics. Best of luck with writing, assuming that you're still working on the fic!
Guest chapter 3 . 4/28/2019
So this story is pretty much abandoned now?
KinkyAnonymously chapter 3 . 1/22/2019
Need to find me a good Ren fic where everyone's perpetually arounded by him. I gotta ask tho...when everyone was fucking wet for him was that his semblance or just his raw sexual draw? And as for Ciel and Jaune. I fucking love Jaune. The way you've done him up is actually him if he ever got over White Bread. And Ciel? Genuinely like her and how she's portrayed but still a fan of that sweet Ciel that people usually go for. Anyway I'm loving the story fam keep up the good shit please and thank you
IROCK108 chapter 3 . 1/22/2019
noice.
Tarbtano chapter 3 . 11/24/2018
Excellent stuff so far, and a very original pairing. Looking forward to seeing this progress!
Guest chapter 3 . 11/19/2018
Don't tell me you've abandoned this story?
Guest chapter 3 . 10/11/2018
How will the dance chapter go now?
6tailedninja chapter 3 . 9/14/2018
Nice use of Ren and his semblance!
Guest chapter 3 . 9/12/2018
This is a good chapter and an awesome story
Guest chapter 3 . 9/11/2018
Awesome! Please continue this story, it’s amazing.
Josh Spicer chapter 3 . 9/12/2018
Not sure how I feel about Pyrrha being irked about Jaune/Ciel as a reader.
AxDevilman chapter 3 . 9/12/2018
This is going to be one of my favorites, I just know it. Good job with Ren, I haven't seen any other fic implementing his semblance to a fight in anyway or form, I believe this is the first time I see is semblance in a fight too.
I'm keeping an eye on this!
jairoesme chapter 3 . 9/12/2018
awesome . even though we didn't see much I love the way ciel fights. and yes Ren is the real master mind here
BukkakeNoJutsu chapter 3 . 9/11/2018
That was sweet!
blaiseingfire chapter 3 . 9/11/2018
The adorable, those two really are cute together :D
But that ending scene is giving my bad vibes for the future D: LEAVE THEM ALONE CINDER
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