It's a good story about Dr.C working on his experiments before he became half cockroach half human, not many thought about this kind of story (as far as I know). And also yeah, not bad for your first MvA fanfiction :)

I did liked the tv series of MvA, I was truly hoping for a second season, but it didn't made it for 2 huge reasons D:
But you Gotta admitt the hamster in it was a great touch, it was one of the best characters for me :D

I'm still hopeful with a future where MvA will get a movie sequel.

Nice job w/the setup of the character. I like the clever research he has w/an obstacle course.

Fixes:
setting (its) effect
(one) hour.
"OK,"
test," he
shoes. (T)hen
things (I) do
off," he said. (H)e
into (its) pen
(one) minute
"Perfect,"

Good writing of him risking hos life for science, getting the bug back to the pen, and his goal for the future. I never realized there was a TV show and would be fine w/a film sequel. Fun story!