This was nice story i wish there is a part 2 to see ranga complete adventure

I too had a stroke trying to read this good Lord. Good thing it's obvious that it's readable but not enjoyable so I can skip it and lee searching

I just had a stroke trying to read this good lord

couldn't you make a Pov version of this book?
pure PoV of his children?

im really interested what'll happen if Light yagami is reborn there.

Tanya von degurechaff

im interested and im suren im not the only one

Nice

This reads like it was written in mandarin then translated in google translate. Good concept and story but giving me a stroke.

Curious to what you will do next. I personally want to them go against an actual threat to freshen things up either way I get the whole idea of gamer systems is to become strong through some sort of means.

Honestly still one of the best crossover fic I ever read, by bring in rare crossover it really did make the fic super interesting. Can’t wait for ya book 2. Subarashii

Now your purposefully making the story boring. Why do you.. you know what? I'll stop reading and give you no need to read negative comments about the fic. Thanks.

Dude you lost your plot or maybe you designed it for failure when you added too much of skills and Chinese cultivation in all Japanese Manga/Anime & World's which doesn't mix well with that type.
I'm skipping everything until he goes into a world and skip again till he goes to other world if he is destroying the world.

Huh, didn't even noticed you finished it till now...
Though I wasn't here five years ago for the first version I did start reading this around the beginning of the rewrite...
it was a nice ride, I might re-read it later again, for now I'll check your other stories and the list you have in your fav/follows, can't wait for book 2!

though I kinda hope it stays as Ragnas POV(as in the Main Character) considering I'm pretty used to it... and I like it... though I'll hold any comments incase you change the Main character until I see who, if you do that is

it would be interesting in ignorant children pov, those who don't know that their parents is fully aware of reincarnation.

im really interested what the Mc in Maid samaits a 'normal animewould do and/or think.

Amazing work dude glad you completed a lengthy fic and it was a success on this site and stay safe dude.

Too many grammer mistakes and senteces that contain redundant words. Because of them, I had to stop multiple times and lost the flow of the story. Dropping this, as for now, it hurts to read.

Please pick up the kumagawa one or dream master pls.