Thank you for not having the sisters meddle. It's so hard and ANNOYING to find one that doesn't. Great story

Lori was a really good big sister at the beginning, and Lynn would do something that crazy. The talk Lincoln and Jordan shared with each was cute, and now they've kissed!

This wasn't a bad chapter, even though I predict Lincoln may feel awkward at Jean Juan's later.

This felt so real, the awkwardness, letting emotions get the better of oneself, then regretting it, Jordan talking to her grandmother for advice, the two of them agreeing to give it a trial run (kind of like the Big Bang Theory).

Another sweet chapter! It was hilarious seeing the old folks get those kids time to themselves, and Jordan having a flashback when Lincoln and Lynn came to her party! I thought that was adorable!

WoW! Now that was a fun game of dodgeball. Clyde was vicious! And apparently, Coach Pacowski has a soft side.

Aw, this is cute. I'll admit I'm not much for pineapple pizza, but it's always cute when you find someone who likes the same toppings

Who knew a Dodgeball game could be so... Intense. I've never had that way

Continue please

I don't have much else to say lol

This story is magnificent. I had such an awesome time reading it. I loved every chapter. Kudos to you, sir.

I was actually surprised to see this.

I wasn't expecting a R63 chapter. This is a welcomed changed, to spice things up and make it special. It was nice seeing this relationship blossom from a different perspective, one where Jordan's the boy and Linka's... the girl, obviously lol.

Excellent work, my friend.

I'm still not feeling good enough to proofread

You never do it regardless of how you're feeling lol

This was actually adorable! I'm running out of words lmao I loved it. I find myself really invested in Jordan's relationship with all the girls. I love it. And of course, her relationship with lincoln stays as beautiful and endearing as ever.

You're a God.

You know, I've always *liked* Jordancoln.

This chapter made me actually *ship* them.

That's honestly the best review I can give.

This was fanstastic.

I loved Mollie's complicated feelings towards Lincoln's, her support towards Jordan, and how anxious both kids (Jordan and Lincoln) were with making this date work. Honestly, it's obvious they both like each other, they shouldn't be nervous about a first date gone wrong or anything :weary:

That being said, the best part of this chapter were the Loud sisters. Lynn turning around, grabbing her own shoulders and making out with herself was the highlight for me.

I love this story.

This was my favorite chapter so far! I actually had a lot of fun with it, and it was adorable a k. Like, daaaaaaaaamn, it was soooo cute!

Them playing pool was a perfect demonstration of how to use clichés right. I loved it, it was really romantic and intimate. It made my heart flutter. So cute, unf.

And the confession at the end... CHAN CHAN CHAAAAAN.

I'm really looking forward to their date. I feel like it's kinda dumb to be like "JUST ONE CHANCE TO SEE IF THIS WORKS" lol, like, give yourself at least three or four chances.