Whats wrong with eating Mac'n'cheese with ketchup?

I want to finish this, but I can't. The writing is unnecessarily sexualized. Quite surprised this isn't featured on r/menwritingwomen yet.

A few changes here and there to the original I noticed. Some smaller, some bigger like in the last few chapters, but all in all still a good story so far. Shame that this hasnt been updated in the last months. One can only hope.

That ending. I love this!

Just caught up with this story and loved every minute of it. Especially loved the length of it, as I personally love longer fanfics. Hope you're doing well in these rough times, and I can't wait to see the end of the remastered version of THE!

MY HEART! Every time Ruby stutters it just sends a pain through my heart. She's so nervous and all that. It breaks my heart.

loving the story, I always wondered what it would be like to have a Grimm Summoning semblance, and this story sorta answers that

love the computer/program style of text when ever Penny is thinking/deciding things, really reinforces that fact that she is a robot/android

can't wait to see how this all turns out

I really liked the Rose-Xiao Long family in this. Though I will say that I think you're exaggerating Yang a bit much here. This is pre-character development, but this still seems a bit much from her. But otherwise, it was really sweet to see how she's still supportive of Ruby.

Also this probably wasn't your intent, but I like to imagine Tyrian being the thing Cinder's so afraid of. He... mostly fits the description. At the very least, he's categorically inhuman.

Thanks for writing this.

Oooh. This is a very interesting premise. And you really captured Ozpin's optimism well. But I think my favorite thing is how Ruby is still adorably herself, despite all the differences. I don't read a lot of AU fics, but a lot of them change Ruby to the point of changing her personality. True, this version's probably a bit more timid, but she's still recognizable.

On a more personal note, the core concept of this version of Ruby reminds me a lot of this original fiction I've been kicking around. It's not the same, but very similar, and perhaps reading this can be helpful.

Thank you for writing this.

Oh thank whatever force that is out there. I thought I saw a completed label and was going to go strangle myself.

“She hated a story without a happy ending”

This feels like classic volume one RWBY, but also not at the same time. A taste of he old, but of the new.

Extremely enjoyable, better than the original. When will ya do volume 2?!

Killing isn’t murder. There is a distinct difference.
Murder is unjustified killing.
Killing can be at least justified in some form or fashion.
Soldiers are killers. Peace officers are killers.
But most of the time they aren’t murderers.
Murder and killing have a fine delineation.

This remaster is epic. I thought the original was amazing enough but then you even improved it.

This story is amazing and awesome. I hope you finish your remaster soon.