...Ouch. There’s so much angst between the two!

You can just feel the pain in their dialogues.

Brilliant awesome over the top really great I don’t have any other words

I would have loved to see trhis continue, but I understand that it was made to give some more history on your art. But man, I am hooked if it continued.

Whoa, in ten years, Weiss has become even colder. I mean I understand why she did that, "desperate times call for desperate measures". But still, she should have known that the subject Penny is very sensitive to Ruby... But that's normal. Responsibility, pressure and homework make you put a weight (or sword of damocles) over your shoulders (what Ruby does not really have), and we do not necessarily notice the changes in our personality.

Anyway, by following your work on DeviantART, it's nice to see a glimpse of the story of RWBY 3.0, Salem defeated (to my understanding), a new, more powerful Grimm (logical, the more time goes by, the stronger they become, so Weiss's reasoning makes sense), the new situation of our protagonists...

In short, it's a good job, thank you for having a story about your work, it's nice.

Amazing

...Ouch. Pressure can seriously mess up life.

I don't really care what Au this is, I say if she wanted to Ruby could have kicked Weiss' butt.

I can't believe she said that!

I need to know what happend next!

You must really hate Weiss do you? Why else would you make her turn the world against her?

Ouch my heart

Awesome story dish! I'm really enjoying your AU and I could feel the internal conflict between both Weiss and Ruby, with both of them doing what they believe is right. I personally lean more towards Ruby's side, as I've always seen Penny as just as human as any of the other characters regardless of how she was "born".

Amazing, cant wait for more!

Intriguing. I agree with Weiss on this. Sad she's destined to be a tragic ending regardless of what she does, personally and professionally. I do think its unfair Ruby takes a higher moral ground when she too also works for SRED. If she really was upset about she should just join Yang.

Holy crap... if there was ever anything to break these two it would be something like this. For Weiss to basically say she helped Ruby for the mission purpose before doing it because she's her friend had tok hurt. She's lucky Yang wasn't there, she probably would've decked Weiss. Really good job, I could hear the VAs doing these lines, a great job keeping the characters in line with their canon selves. Here's hoping for more!