Do not listen to the two that you see are negative reviewers because they suck I like this story and hope you continue to the rest finding out

It would have been better of the dialogues were understandable as at the moment, there is no paragraph breaks between the two speaking.
Not only does using paragraph makes it easier, it also lengthens the story, making it seem larger. I have written a story of more than 4000 words but less than 5000, but with the help of appropriate paragraph breaks, it seems longer.

Okay..? The story itself wasn't bad, but you did drop quite the bombshell at the end there.
When you say something as plot-related as "Ozpin is Ruby's father", we all expect a proper explanation to it. If you just throw a fact like that into the story (right at the end of a one-shot, no less) without an apparent reason, it just confuses people...

out of every thing a grimm!pyrrha scares me because of the potential of the heartache involved but that being said I loved what you done with it and really love the world you built and I hope I see more of it

Very cute to see Jaune reunited and accept Grimm Pyrrha.
About Pyrrha Aura and semblance, I think it makes sense that she would have her semblance as he still has her soul however I think she would still have aura but her ability to use it would be very restricted. Having a grimm arm prevented Cinder from using aura to augment said arm but it did not prevent her from producing Aura and using it on her human body. So that should mean Grimm Pyrrha should have Aura but she would only be able to use in on what was left of her human body and to fuel her semblance.
Any chance we could see follow up chapter showing Pyrrha and Jaune adjusting to her having a Grimm body, along with everyone learning about it?
Keep up the good work.

Not bad at all, Pyhrra's appearence maybe is slightly exaggerated(though it could be a thing like 'The stronger i am, the more human i look', same for Salem), but i'm glad her friends will help here. Regarding Aura, i still believe they have a form of it, after all Remnant's people know only how how kill them and i'm even writing a story about the theme in italian thath i plan on translate here. Aniway, make as you wish, keep up the good work and see you soon.

dont listen to this dickhead i could tell exactly who was talking. its an amazing story and i hope you dont stop writing it just because of some asshole telling you your writing sucks.

Wanted to give this a try, but the paragraph structure would have gotten me an automatic fail in early elementary school. You can't tell who is saying what. No one should have to tell someone capable of writing in the English language that every time someone new starts speaking it's a new paragraph. Yet we have to tell these kids exactly that far too often, and most of the time they don't really care.

If an author does not take pride in their work, doesn't particularly wants to put in the effort to make it legible, nor wants to improve in their ability, why should I bother making the slightest effort to read it?