I would actually like to see a continuation of this story. It has potential and I think it would be interesting to see how they both fair with the separation.

I have a feeling that Kara will not fair all that well. I also don’t think Lena will either really, but I think Lena will force herself to stick to her decision out of stubbornness, despite how much the separation is hurting her.

In a way I feel that Kara would blame the whole situation on the ‘need’ to maintain her identity and resent becoming Supergirl, and that resentment will turn her away from being Supergirl.

Anyway, these are just my thoughts on what you have written, which is really thought provoking! I do hope you take a stab at continuing this story a little more though, no matter if I am going in the right direction or not. It would still be interesting to read how things go for them.

It's angsty almost like an internal seppuku

That literally just broke my heart

I don’t think I’m ready to read this quite yes so imma save it till later. And I’m still wondering if Kara is going to sing to Lena

No yelling needed. Kara deserves every bit for as shitty as she has been to Lena.

Oh cmon make a sequel ... lol please ? For us ?

Ugh, that was like a punch to the gut... but in a good way. Fabulous writing!

I'm new to the reading fandom for supergirl (I spend most of my time with Rizzoli & Isles), I just wanted to say so far this is the first story I have read where characters actually feel like the characters, rather than a bunch of teenagers with the characters names. Feels like you have drawn from canon to write a believeable story. Also I love angst, so I didn't mind this at all. Thanks for sharing.

\3 R.I.P. my heart and soul

Ouch