Dude I'm FEELING SOOOO MUCH PAIN! IZUKU SHOULD NOT HURT THIS MUCH

izuku is falling into darkness despite how he says he fights it. this is not good.

Hope you continue

Wow he’s being way more of a douche than I expected

That name you gave doesn't come up in ao3.

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Hmm. I can't really say that I liked, or hated this story. It was more of a curiosity that drove me to continue reading; to see where it might end up. If you decide to continue with a Reboot though, I'd be all for it, since while it felt a bit off to see Izuku so spiteful, it was also...hmm...I don't know how to put it.

Understandable in a sense? Maybe. But that aside. I don't frequent Ao3 much, but mind telling me what you go by there, just in case you plan on moving the reboot there?

Well, if youre considering a rewrite i would recommend to cut the angst a bit. Half this story is practically agnst to the point that at one point i thought that Aqua had developed a quirk and that it was named 'Baggage for All' because almost everyone she interacted with ended up with a pile of baggage on their shoulders so there would be angst... and drama.

I didnt like either as i said at the beginning how you basically made Aqua a country bumpkin of sort with her descriptions of MHA world despite she has been into other worlds already and those worlds arent measured in just a couple city blocks and that the only shop in existence are the moggles and that there is just a handful of people in every world. That, doesnt make sense. The worlds in the game are like that because Square Enix cannot and will not make a full simulation a la GTA for every world onl to make you mess around for a bit in every world and then be done with it. It would be a monumental waste.

There are other things i remember annoying me but i can not recall anything more specific than that.

On the other hand, i would have liked to see a pure Keyblade wielder Izuku, instead of giving him the old OfA again. I have yet to see a good MHA fanfic featuring a Keyblade!Izuku.

In any case, good luck with the rewrite

Excited to hear you plan to continue this even if it is a re-write as the idea you have here is interesting thou i was unaware you had a second account as it was not in your profile

Power to you Silverbits.

If you are rewriting, please make the relashionshi of Izuku and Aqua better.

I understand where you're coming from, I rebooted a story of mine too

I look forward to your new work!

I hope you decide to rewrite this. What is your ao3 name?

My soul just died inside...