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hoh. I wonder how she'd react to Sarah. that would be a complicated encounter. and unless I missed something, now I'm wondering. who is Sonja?

Hmm...well that's. .. interesting. bunch of confusing things. Should I be getting to the manga to keep up? Sounds like the people of the walls lack support from even their own kind outside paradis. Understandable, though.

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Can not wait to see what happens next. :D

ooh! exciting! cant wait for things to get rolling. the calm before the storm.

i freaking love this.

After you are done with this story can make one from the called code realize the oc will cardia's little sister who is trying to find the truth about her past and trying to redeem herself from the horrible things she did while following her older brother blinded by anger towards her older sister until she finds out that she was being used (just a story idea i hope you follow it)

Every chapter I read, I tell myself “it’s probably gonna improve along the way”, but so far it hasn’t at all. I really love the story, it’s the only reason I stuck around, but you really have to fix these issues. It’s sit/sitting/sat, not seat/seating/seated. "They" is referring to a group, "there" is referring to a place, "their" is group possessive. There are some more minor mistakes but these stand out the most. As I’ve said, I really like the story and I can’t wait for the next update, but please, these errors are really easy to fix and I’m genuinely surprised they haven’t been improved upon so far. Looking forward to the next one!

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Can't wait for the next conversation between Sarah and Mikasa.

Great chapter as always. I really want some dialogue between Mikasa and Sarah...

Wait wasn't Sarah the one whom went behind Mikasa's back and had sex with someone else?

What's taking you so long

Great chapter :D