Oh, Oh my. (0\\0)

Whoa... there’s Dark Arnold and then there’s... man, this guy is like 50 Shades of Shortman. The unaired scene... the real reason the show was though, that was intense and kind of uncomfortable (which I sense was the intention) but it’s always interesting to see how many interpretations there can be of this show. Well done.

Okay, Deep Voice. I get that you enjoy writing Arnold/Helga interactions that are... erm... rated M, as you say. And that's totally cool - to each their own. But I'm kind of baffled by the fact that you choose to keep the characters at age 10 (or 11 and 12, as in your other story). It makes me so beyond uncomfortable, I cannot even get through a few words of it without wanting to douse my head in a raging fire and transport myself to a land far, far away.

I'm sorry for the brutal honesty. Granted, I'm not a big fan of sexually explicit stories in general, so I'm sure that plays a role in my own distaste. And also, you're obviously a talented writer and that's awesome. Keep writing. I just feel like if you aged the characters up to even 15 or 16, it would be a whole different ballgame and would be way more acceptable to me as a reader on a very, very basic human level.

This story was really intense. A fun concept, but I vote because they did not have sex if they had not been dating.

I will miss this story TT-TT

An excellent job

Heh, this was just too good.

Keep the good writing.

Great job! I loved that episode! One of the reasons Helga reminds me of myself is because she has to be in control lol. That episode also upset me in a way because she did very few things to imply she still had feelings for him: She was speechless when he 'remembered' her birthday, and squeezed him tight when he was dragging her on the dance floor. Otherwise, she acted like she really hated him the rest of the episode.

That's also what makes her personality so great though; not letting anyone take control over her. This was one of those episodes that created all kinds of mixed feelings lol.

I'm impressed with your memory of the lines and agree with how she seemed to be feeling during the dance with him. I also agree about why she was uncomfortable during the dance. I think any situation that forced her to allow Arnold to be in control (especially in front of their friends) would make her feel that way. Great job. :)

[applauso]

There is an Alternate Universe fanfic where Arnold refuses to give Helga a hand and help her out of the pool, and just walks away. Never could find it again...

Arnold's shyness I'm still laughing

This was a lovely read

What made me laugh the most is when Helga said if he got amnesia it wouldn't of a difference. Which is true. That was clever and hilarious. Also that helga tries to manipulate him with her blindness.

This first chapter was utterly fantastic and well written. I was excited to see that there are more chapters. You have a wonderful way with words. This is totally realistic to Helgas characters especially when arnold went limp in her arms. I can't believe you wrote this years ago... You should be utterly commended.

I can not believe there's only one last. u.u
and about your question. they were all my favorite phrases XD
Did they really do it? I thought you were kidding.
I will miss this story
I'll wait for the other chapter :)

Heh, this is pretty good. And funny how Arnold didn't get all the hints of Helga not being blind.

Keep the good writing.

I know this is sad, but I'm having trouble figuring out if Arnold has figured out if she's not really blind yet? Although she's obviously not, it seems to be going back and forth with implying that Arnold's aware of it lol. I like the chapter. I like all romance stories between the two of them :)

Drama? You're the Queen of Innuendo! :D :D :D