Reviews for The forked Golden Path
Ceville chapter 7 . 3/24/2014
Ahhh, I'm loving this story! I know it's been a while since you last updated, but I can't wait to read more!
Victoria Wolf chapter 1 . 5/18/2007
O_O
sarah7174 chapter 7 . 10/17/2006
This seems like it was going to be a gr8 fic, i really enjoyed what has been written so far it's a shame that you decided not to continue with it.
Noc007 chapter 7 . 6/16/2006
Nicely written, I must say!

Pity it hasn't been updated tho :(
Glass Diamonds chapter 7 . 6/3/2006
Wow... that was intense. This stories really good, I love Leto OC fics and you don't get anywhere near enough of them, keep updating!
Stranded chapter 7 . 7/27/2004
Wow. That was a great chapter. You left us in quite a long suspence. I really hope you update soon because it is sounding really interesting. You have some great tension in the chapter and the next one is sure to be amazing.
Hwi Noree chapter 1 . 4/27/2004
Yikes! That was...bad. Have you actually read the books or did you just watch the CoD mini-series and decide Leto was "omg, lik so hot!11eleven"? It's a horrific Mary Sue, and you obviously have no understanding of Frank Herbert's universe.
The writing itself, however, is quite good.
grace chapter 7 . 4/26/2004
omg u updated! thank you so much, i thought u had forgotten about this great story...anyways another great chapter, the intensity of the situation just rediated off the screen, i hope it'll take u sooner to update next time, i just have to know what happens next!
Asthroth chapter 6 . 3/12/2004
Cool, this story is really suspenseful and intreging. I like the way you discribe the people and settings. Can't wait for the end
Death at Death's Door chapter 2 . 2/25/2004
Second chapter is pretty awesome too! _
Death at Death's Door chapter 1 . 2/25/2004
awesome start! _ luv the story! _~
Bad Cliche chapter 6 . 12/30/2003
intreeging easy to follow... verry good, i cant wait to see more
roswellachick chapter 6 . 10/12/2003
om goodness ahe really has been throught a lot

duude wait every1 in her planet is dead?-*sniffle*

hey...wait whos the new bad chick?
roswellachick chapter 5 . 10/12/2003
" She was beginning to see that he revealed mostly nothing about anything that might be going on inside that head of his. And she couldn’t help but swing back and forth between approval and frustration over that simple little fact."-tee jee jee

awwe poor Septinia

"Deep sapphire eyes reflecting the brilliant stars unblinkingly above their heads like a mirror till they looked as if they were drowning with the universe suddenly buried deep within them,"-WOW thats incred writing
roswellachick chapter 4 . 10/12/2003
"... remembered why she had always been afraid of man-made heights ..."-yay i'm w/her heights r evil...tee nice chapie

that must have been such a kewl feelin when she got 2 the sand/spice

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