I wanting for the next chapter

When are you going to posted chapter 9?

I love how you integrate the Bakugan video game with the anime canon also including The player character (Sora) and Leonidas. Plus you chose Darkus as his attribute, I hope you update soon and also finish the story throughout the entire franchise (New Vestroia, Gundalian Invaders and Mechtanium Surge)

Please, please, keep writing the chapters!

you have spelled "Pokemon" instead of "Bakugan" where Sora losses two of his Bakugan

You aight man? It’s okay if you need some time for chapter 9

Will Sora and Leonidas get to face Shun and Skyress in the next chapter?

are you ok? what taking so long? i'm loving this, and i need to know what's next!

sora x fabia

Welp I'm kinda, that being a key word, disappointed, not in how you're developing the story, I'm glad that someone made a good Darkus Leonidas fic, Finally! It's the shippings, I read the summary of your story's future chapters and I know there'll be a new OC that'll probably be Sora's love interest, Key word: Probably. And the reason of my kinda disappointment is that I shipped him with Alice or, for some reason I thought she'll apear this season, Fabia. (Though that may be because I have a crush on her but whatever)

And about the story itself, but my complain comes from de latest chapter.

The battle was grate, but I hoped Sora will stay in that state of despair after being beaten son badly by Masquerade, I know he won but it would be better to leave it as a hollow victory with Sora's spirit crushed. Also there's a whole lack of Reaper whose my favorite Bakugan but that's another point.

My point being it would have been great to have a mini-arc, no more than two chapters, with Sora getting his spirit back and not fearing the Doom Dimension, at least not much because is still the effing Doom Dimension, and seeing him win more battles with more than just Leo. 'Cause the battles are kinda repetitive:

Sora fights wins against two bakugan, last bakugan of the opponent pust him in danger, Leonidas appears, boom victorycept with Drago and Vladitor)

Again, love the story but those points, except the first wich is more personal, could elevate it more.

But hey is your story, and you are doing a great work so keep it up. Waiting for a new part.

i'm looking forward to see what sora's adventure will bring him. so please continue with this awesome fan story.

How will Dan and the others react when they hear that sora beat masquerade

I read your story, I gotta say it’s not bad man don’t quit on making this story it has potential to be in the history books.

you didn’t update in a while, are you ok

Will Sora and Leonidas meet Shun in the next chapter?