Well, I hope that Nightlight can bring a different path in the story with his comentary. Thank you for correcting my grammar, I always have problem with that. Thanks for the chapter!

I love the chapter! I am so excited to see how things go from here on out!

I can't wait to see what's going to happen. Great chapter!

I think you should write more, when you can as it is really good so for, but only if you want to that is, please and thank you.

You can find the movie online if you really need it to go help you write it

I suggest using kimcartoon .to

This is one of my favourite fics, I check it weekly, the idea is amazing.
If Jack's mind was an actual place instead of a... I'm not sure what it is, I feel like the image for it would be Jokul and Nightlight playing chess, but Jokul flips the table and Jack is just laughing hysterically. I drew fanart, but I don't know how you send it?

This story is spectacular! I'm a little excited for the Guardians and Pitch to find out about Jokul and Nightlight. Especially Pitch, with his history with Nightlight and all.

Aaaahh I missed this story, actually I stoped reviewing (is that a word?) when I read something so my english is out of practice, like a lot xD But I do my best ok? Of course I read the Author notes, you can always find something interesting if you do. I'll be waiting for the next update. Good job!

Amazing chapter!

This chapter is so great! I miss this story

But yeah, as far as the corona virus goes, don't follow the Aussies example... some of us are idiots and annoying as hell lol

He I was never a big fan of the guardians but not pitch either. While fear is needed to keep people safe it shouldn't be tipped to the point that you cant live your life. Still, they should have kept in mind that fear is a necessity.

I think you should write more, when you can as it is really good so for, please and thank you.

pls update! love the story!

So awesomely!

Love the chapter! Poor Sandy...