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Good but another junk

I have read the previous chapters and honestly this story has potential. I love how you have merged the Fate Prisma Illya and the typical Fate/Stay Night world with the Campione one near perfectly.

Now I have to ask. Do you take requests? Because I have one. If you cannot do it can you please post it as a challenge or on your story page? I may have to send it again to make sure nothing is cut out.

It is a Dragon Ball series and Ikkitousen crossover. Take each series of Dragon Ball as one story at a time while still being a crossover with Ikkitousen.

The story series is rated T to M.

Sayians and Dragons, The Power of a Thousand Part 1: The World of The Story.

The world is a merger of the Ikkitousen and the Dragon Ball World with Goku still a Sayian who is just starting his adventures.

But their are three twists involved with the original Dragon Ball series.

1. All the Gods of Earth’s mythology and religions are real along with the Kai’s, Gods of Destruction Xeno and the Angels. When the Gods of legend get involved they have all the abilities of their legends, their pop culture counterparts and their various incarnations, the characters they inspired in our world and are as powerful from the viewpoint of the ancient cultures that worshipped them. They can do anything that can be imagined with their spheres of influence but a creator or head deity of a mythology and religion is virtually omnipotent. Their only weaknesses are the ones found in their original religions and mythologies.

The reason why many of the Gods of Earth are no longer active is because that after the Age of Myths and Legends they developed a non interference policy on the mortal world; at least for those still around. Some pantheons have moved on and created their own universes outside of Zeno’s authority and their universes are what the ancient people thought the universe was. All the Gods of legend have ascended to a higher plane of existence beyond anything in Dragon Ball by mastering and perfecting the Magics of their religions and Dragon Ball Magic with Ki. They are far more powerful than the Supreme Kais and Gods of Destruction.

Kibito, Shin, and Old Kai are not the only Supreme Kai’s of Universe 7. The Supreme Kai Avatars in Dragon Ball Heroes are here as actual characters and allies to the protagonists and they eventually reach levels of power equal to Super Sayian Blue. Also the Demon God Avatars in the Dragon Ball Heroes games are here and they are stronger then Dabura.

How the influence of the Gods of Mythology being real applies to Kami and The position of The Guardian of Earth is this. The Guardian of Earth is thought to be the Monotheistic and the Abrahamic God but is nowhere as powerful and he is empowered to act as the ambassador to The Kai’s and Xeno and be the Earth’s protector but is still mortal. Hence why their are multiple guardians but they all have God Ki.

2. Goku and the Ikkitousen cast are children when you start the story and Goku meets Kokin and Hakufu who are children on his path and adventures and eventually the rest of the Ikkitousen cast help Goku on his path when you go into Goku’s teen years and into Ikkitousen proper before Dragon Ball Z, Dragon Ball Super and Dragon Ball GT. This would allow Goku, Hakufu, and Kokin to bond and be true friends and Hakufu and Kokin can get tougher than in cannon with different training and learning other martial arts styles.

3. All the Sayians in the Sayian Saga survive and turn good. Raditz gets with Launch and has children with her and Raditz grows in power to keep up with Goku and Vegeta until Raditz reaches Super Sayian 4.

Nappa turns good and settles down with a lady and reaches Super Sayian and Super Sayian 2.

Sayians and Dragons, The Power of a Thousand Part 2: The Growth of The Ikkitousen cast.

All the characters of Ikkitousen gain all their cannon powers but they get stronger so that they can keep up with Planet and potential Universe Busters. The Ikkitousen crew must seek out and train under Master Roshi, The Crane Hermit, Korin, Mister Popo, Kami, King Kai, the Z Fighters, and some have their potential unlocked by Grand Elder Guru and go through the ritual of The Old Kai to awaken the last of their hidden potential, and some have their potential unlocked by drinking The Ultra Divine Water and those who do survive! Everyone in the story is as cannon as possible in their personalities and development.

Sayians and Dragons, The power of a Thousand Part 3: The Powers of Son Goku.

Goku at the start of the story is as strong as he is in the movie Dragon Ball: The Path to Power but he gets even stronger. Son Goku gets everything he has officially from across the entire franchise. Goku gets everything from Dragon Ball, Dragon Ball Z, Dragon Ball GT, and Dragon Ball Super including all the various forms Goku has from all the movies, the manga, and the anime including filler. Goku when he goes into his teen years is told by Koukin and Hakufu that he turned into a Oozaru and what he did to the Pilaf Gang’s Castle, Goku realizes that he killed his grandfather and the danger at looking at the full moon and seeks to master the Oozaru form and to do so he decides to keep his tail to master the primal powers within himself as both his form of self expression and atonement and succeeds. In the Android Saga Goku perfects Super Sayian, gets Super Sayian Kaio-Ken, and in the Cell Saga he unlocks Super Sayian 2.

In the Buu Saga Goku gains Super Sayian 3 and masters it and he learns about Super Sayian 4 from Old Kai and works to gain it. During his training he masters the Golden Oozaru form and reaches Super Sayian Four and goes into Super Full Power Saiyan 4 to destroy Kid Buu and save the universe. Goku after training between the events of Dragon Ball Z and Dragon Ball Super Son Goku reaches the level of power he had at the start of Dragon Ball GT.

In Dragon Ball Super Son Goku absorbs the God Ki and keeps it in his body. He then obtains the Super Sayian God Form and Super Sayian Blue. Son Goku also gets Super Sayian Blue Kaio-Ken and Perfected Super Sayian Blue. Goku can use Hakai like in the Dragon Ball Super Manga and eventually fully masters Ultra Instinct without many of his drawbacks as Goku trained to overcome those weaknesses.

Son Goku also gains the powers and abilities of his inspirations Sun Wukong from Journey to the West and Hanuman from the Ramayana.

Here are the powers of Sun Wukong.

Super Strength: Sun Wukong's trade mark Compliant Staff is extremely heavy. Sun Wukong at his weakest could easily lift one ton and kill a tiger in a single strike and break the mountain he was imprisoned under for 500 years in half. He could have lifted the mountain off him if the Buddha had not placed a binding seal on the mountain.

Son Goku cannot naturally bust mountains with brute force unless he goes Super Sayian or with energy blasts. In time he can here.

Not Quite Flight: Sun Wukong's jumping allows him to reach the Celestial Heavens in a single bound or cross an ocean. Sun Wukong is able to cartwheel halfway across the world in a single leap though he is capable of actual flight as well.

Goku can fly and teleport anywhere he can sense energy. Goku gains the mobility of the Monkey King and his flight and teleportation abilities.

Nigh Invulnerable and Complete Immortality: The reason the Buddha intervened was because the gods failed in outright destroying him. Sun Wukong after training under a Immortal Taoist Sage became functionally immortal, then he wrote his name and the names of his subjects out of The Book of Life and Death also making him immortal. Sun Wukong then ate the Peaches of immortality, drank the heavenly wine of the Jade Emperor which also made him immortal and ate the pills of immortality of Laozi, which also made him immortal. Sun Wukong survived being burned alive by a heavenly fire that can kill immortals and after surviving he became even stronger with a nearly invulnerable steel like body with the elixir of immortality hardening in his body. After that Sun Wukong survived having a mountain dropped on him by the Buddha himself. When Sun Wukong was on his journeys he found and ate the Human Faced Fruit that also made him Immortal and he became completely immortal when he ascended into the Heavens as a Buddha.

Sun Wukong is fairly fireproof with him being immune to Earthly and Heavenly Fire with only The True Fire of Samadhi able to hurt him. Even most Demonic Weapons were useless against him.

Son Goku can take quite a bit of damage and as a Sayian he can keep his youth until he turns eighty and has come back from the dead more than once and so have some of his friends and enemies.

Self-Duplication: One of Wukong's signature moves has him pulling out a bunch of his hair and blowing on them, resulting in each hair turning into a clone of him. But it did not drain the Monkey King.

Goku can do that with the Multiform technique but it divides the strength of the user of the technique in proportion to the amount of copies. Son Goku masters both duplication techniques but moves on and uses Sun Wukong’s version as it did not drain Sun Wukong.

Enlightenment Super Powers: Wukong’s magic comes from studying Taoism and learning the secrets of the universe from his master and through intense training.

Son Goku gains a form of enlightenment in cannon by mastering his life force. Son Goku gains a form of enlightenment in this story as he learns to use Chi, the energies of Yin and Yang along with his Ki. Son Goku also studies magic and unlocks and masters his chakras(not the Naruto ones)by Buddhist meditations and Yoga exercises and gains new powers by practicing Taoist and Dragon Ball Magic along with his cannon powers to gain further enlightenment.

Voluntary Shapeshifting: Allegedly 72 transformations, but in fact he can transform into whatever he likes.

Son Goku is the king of transformations with the Ozaruu form, the Kaio-Ken and the various Super Sayian transformations.

Son Goku gets all the transformations of Sun Wukong when studying Taoism and Son Goku masters the Ozaruu form, the Kaio-Ken, and Goku gets all his official transformations from across the entire franchise including all his official Super Sayian transformations.

Mind over Matter: Sun Wukong is capable of telekinesis, and can make inanimate objects come to life.

Goku’s ki gives him Telepathy and Telekinesis!

New Powers as the Plot Demands: Sun Wukong has a tendency to suddenly reveal often one-off powers or abilities without previous mention that conveniently solve the current problem.

How many times did a Goku pull a technique or victory out of nowhere?

Trade Mark Weapon: Sun Wukong had a staff called the Ryu-Jingu-Ban that could expand all the way to Heaven and retract and change it’s size. Under the Dragon King of the Western Seas the Ryu-Jingu-Ban could control the world’s Ocean's and Tides, it was also indestructible and able to measure and hold down the Milky Way Galaxy.

Goku’s Power Pole is indestructible and can extend to Kami’s Lookout and to the moon. Goku's Power Pole has to have the same abilities as the Ryu-Jingu-Ban but Goku's Power Pole operates on mechanics like Mjölnir from its incarnation in Marvel Comics. Only the pure of heart can use the Power Pole.

World's Greatest Warrior: At the start of his adventures Sun Wukong defeated the 4 Heavenly Kings, 28 Constellations, three celestial armies, Nezha the Lotus Prince, and proved himself the equal of Erlang Shen. Sun Wukong then fought the heavenly army of 100,000 strong at the same time, ripped through Heaven’s greatest champions and not just survived everything they could throw at him but HE GOT EVEN STRONGER. By the time he was punished by the Buddha, he was on the brink of actually becoming the Emperor of Heaven himself. During the Journey To The West Sun Wukong is able to fight and defeat just about everyone including the Dragon of the Heavens with each opponent able to fight like a god himself.

Goku has fought almost everything from Demons, Aliens, Androids, Gods, Dragon's, and in Dragon Ball GT Goku is the greatest warrior in the universe in that timeline and Goku eventually becomes that here.

Ascended to a Higher Plane of existence: Sun Wukong after the events of Journey to the West ascended into a Buddha.

Son Goku in Dragon Ball Super became a physical god and Son Goku ascends to a higher plane of existence at the end of Dragon Ball GT. Goku eventually does both.

Magic Eyes: Sun Wukong had special eyes that could see for miles and through all lies and illusions and could shoot laser beams all the way to Heaven. They did have problems with seeing through smoke and smoke getting in them.

Goku can potentially shoot energy beams through his eyes. Goku’s eyes gain the powers of Wukong’s through studying magic but after he has gained his sensory abilities.

Instant Mastery: Sum Wukong could master any spell or technique with the bare minimum of instruction after seeing it once.

Goku can master any technique if he is taught the basics.

Speaks fluent animal: Sun Wukong could talk to and command animals. Horses to be precise.

Super Not Drowning Skills. Sun Wukong could survive Underwater without oxygen with no problem.

Intangible Man: Sun Wukong could walk through Metal and Rock unhindered.

Speaking of new powers Goku also gains all the powers of Hanuman.

Hanuman is the son of Vayu, the Wind God and is one of the supporting characters in the Hindu Indian epic story the Ramayana. In the Ramayana Hanuman is one of the kind and cheerful Vanara who first befriends Rama and Lakshmana. The Vanaras are a race of anthropomorphic monkeys capable of human speech. In the Ramayana they are the main allies of Rama helping him in his quest to rescue Sita. From then on Hanuman is always helping Rama and Lakshmana when needed the most.

Nice Guy, Humble Hero, and All-Loving Hero: Hanuman is extremely humble, caring and friendly. Hanuman is humble to a fault. He never told Rama about himself and leaves the venue out of embarrassment when the Sage Agastya starts telling Hanuman's backstory to Rama. Hanuman is of a very amiable personality.

Goku is humble, not taking credit for his achievements, kind, pure of heart and is always going to give people a second chance.

Celibate Hero: Hanuman was not interested in having relationships, so he swore an oath of eternal Brahmacharya. However in the versions in Thailand, he has a romance with the mermaid Suvannamaccha and conceives a son with her.

Son Goku was not interested in romance until he married Chi Chi.

Dating Catwoman: In the Thai versions Hanuman has a romance with Ravana's daughter, Suvannamaccha after she becomes his opponent for a time. His wooing of her and explaining the reason for the war on her father spurs Suvannamaccha to turn good and she has a son with Hanuman.

Goku has turned his enemies into his allies in cannon and in this story Goku has Ryofu Housen the series bad girl in his harem.

Monkey King Lite: Hanuman isn't the same as Sun Wukong, but their are similarities. Sun Wukong may have been influenced by Hanuman. Monkey King Lite is about characters who were influenced by Sun Wukong. Sun Wukong can be traced back to about 1000 years, and the Ramayana is even older.

Son Goku is this Trope!

Story-Breaker Power: Hanuman is immune to even the Brahmastra, which is equivalent to a nuclear weapon. He can fly all the way from Lanka to the Himalayas, uproot entire mountains and return to Lanka with the entire mountain in just one night.

Goku is so strong that he can take on almost anyone and win! He has Energy blasts, Super transformations, flight, teleportation, a healing factor, can recover from grievous wounds and get stronger, and has only been sick twice. In Dragon Ball GT Goku is the strongest warrior in the universe.

Superpower Lottery: As a child, Hanuman was blessed by the gods with Complete Immortality, shapeshifting, absolute invulnerability, super strength, perfect health and immunity from diseases, fire and drowning.

World's Strongest Man: Hanuman is so strong that he can lift entire Himalayan mountains and fly all the way to Lanka in one night.

This must happen. Son Goku would have come full circle on his development as a character as he mastered the primal powers within him before ascending to divinity in Dragon Ball Super and is what the Universe 7 Sayians could have been and his abilities go even further beyond by drawing from his inspirations.

Sayians and Dragons, The Power of a Thousand Part 4: Parings.

Goku unknowingly at first being Goku gets a harem with Chi Chi, Hakufu, Ryofu Housen, Kanu Uncho(Kanu is Bisexual in the Manga and in the English translation of the Manga she was seen flirting with Koukin), and Gentoku Ryubi. Son Goku has children from all of them when they all reach adulthood. Shinmei Ryoumou gets with Shishi Ouin, and Yamcha gets with Chouhi after breaking up with Bulma. Bulma and Vegeta get together, Android 18 hooks up with Krillin. Other characters in the Dragon Ball or Ikkitousen cast find love interests from either series so long as it fits their anime or manga cannon characters.

Sayians and Dragons, The Power of a Thousand Part 5: The Ending and the Legacy of Goku.

After Goku, the Z Fighters and the Ikkitousen cast win the Tournament of Power, face the Super version of Broly and put Freiza down for good they have to go down the events of Dragon Ball GT(albeit altered except for the ending)after a time skip. After the Baby saga the Red Star Dragon Balls infected the Earth’s regular Dragon Balls with their negative energy and the crew using them for so long the Shadow Dragons are born and run rampant on the Earth and cause natural disasters and create a rift connecting Earth to Hell freeing all the enemies of the protagonists and furthering the damages to the planet.

After Goku and his companions defeat the Shadow Dragons Son Goku has to leave the Earth with Shenron to prevent the earth from relying on him and the Dragon Balls until the Earth can stand on its own. To help the Earth evolve Krillin and Tien bring back the Turtle and Crane Houses of Martial Arts, Gohan when he is born and grows up writes the Ki Manuel’s from Dragon Ball Online, and Hakufu and the Ikkitousen Cast open their own martial arts schools.

What happens to Goku is something special.

Goku over the years is given proper credit for his accomplishments. Goku was one of the youngest people to become a finalist in the World Martial Arts Tournament. During his adventures he took down the Pilaf Gang, the Red Ribbon Army and King Piccolo. When the fight with King Piccolo is over Goku is given credit as their were cameras and it was live. After being interviewed Goku keeps the Dragon Balls a secret but reveals the truth of the Red Ribbon Army’s fall and is also rewarded for defeating the Red Ribbon Army. Son Goku then wins The World Martial Arts Tournament and after defeating Piccolo Jr Goku is seen as a hero. In the Cell Saga Goku defeats Perfect Cell and lives to tell the tale and is rewarded. At the end of the story Son Goku has become a legendary hero who saved the world to the point that some Hindu’s think that Son Goku was an Avatar of Hanuman and some Buddhists think that Goku was a reincarnation of Sun Wukong the Monkey King.

Among the gods Goku is a hero who saved his universe multiple times and helped save the multiverse.

When Goku leaves Earth with Shenron and The Earth’s Dragon Balls he gains all the powers invulnerability, immortality and the other abilities of Hanuman and Sun Wukong. Son Goku, Shenron and the Earth’s Dragon Balls then ascend to a higher plane of existence and Son Goku evolves into something more than a Super Sayian God, a Supreme Kai, or a God of Destruction. Goku has become a truly Immortal Warrior God, who will protect the universe but only when he is truly needed.

It was interesting I guess. Way too many characters added in a very short time.

How does he know he has e rank luck though? That's a plot bunny for sure.

I Must Praise your ablity to make a Massiver Crossover without It Making Less Sence

First chapter was great, 2nd not as good but ok. Now we have a bunch more characters, why? Seriously you has a lot already, its like 15 to 20 characters in two chapters introduced. It's a damn mess, you dont have to add every damn anime character you know to this.

Wow, your kinda just dumping characters in everywhere huh.

Interesting.

Is Shirou know about UBW?

A shame, I was really looking forward this fic you know? I thought that you learned from your Campione!DxD crossover, but, it's clear that you din't. That crossover was easy to read and fairly good, but it was a mess with too many worlds on the mix and was litle more than a self-insert fanservice fic (because there was no way that Issei would behave like what you writed there, it was too OOC). And this fic here is pretty much the same one with just a different MC that it's OOC too and a bigger harem.

If i were to gess, you just love the ideas of each world (DxD, Campione and FATE), the georgeous female characters and the MC's powers, but you hate their personalities and their essences, even of some female characters.

And Doni was Killed? That easy? And just like in the original corssover not less. Listen, no Campione worth his title would fall that easy, no matter what his foe was. Heck, one even resisted the Autority of a God of time, A GOD OF TIME.

And as much as Doni could be an idiot, he IS a true Campione, sure, he could be killed, but it isn't that easy, he has more Autorities that Siegfried's you know? He could made that Shirou here lost control over his autoritie or even transform the floor into a sword that he can control with his mind to either protect himself or neutralice the Stallion, hell, on the Light Novel, he brought an entire Meteorite that he turned into a "sword" long ago in matter of minutes. Do you have and idea of how fast that had to be? Faster that any modern vehicle that mankind have right now, thats for sure.

Trust me, you could do a good work with your ideas, but like this? Though you do have "follows" and "favs" here, your fic will stay as one more of the "wet dreams" pile. Just look at your reviews, far less than your "follows" and "favs" and I bet that more than half of those are asking for M-Rated scenes with a bunch of girls, to add more worlds and/or girls at the harem, or to give you "kudos" and to despise either the original MC or on other characters, like Doni.

Though, it you do enjoy writting those kind of fics, then there is notting more to say and I'll had to have care to no read anything that was written by "Zutto" ,nor get hyped in order to not feel too crushed by the fic, so, good luck.

Great

Not sure if someone already brought this up this but when Yuumi was taking Shirou to the Occult Club you culled him Issei

Luck is inherent to a Campione - heck, Godou was known to have insane luck even before becoming a Campione. Erica even considered it as one of the things that could mark as someone that had the potential to become a Campione.

Way too much going on