Saijou? Like from Fate/Prototype?

I'm having a great time reading this! Enjoying everyone's reaction to practically OP!Shirou.

And it's only the third chapter! So long, so good, I'm so excited to be reading more of this!

There is no way in hell that Arturia didn't hear Shirou's confession... Damn it, you really know how to tease your fans with these cliffhangers (;~;)!

For all the crazy non-stop shitstorm that has happened since the first chapter, this chapter that concentrated on Waver, Rider, and Taiga was a real nice breather and hilarious all the same :D!

Hi there, i do hope you continue. And i do hope to read next chapter where Shiro open his eyes and find himself close to Arturia as she takes care of him. Oh man, i love this pairing.

Estuvo genial el capitulo, en verdad te luciste

Uh... okay, look, I know shirou is naive but his actions here were on the level of a completely idiotic fool. I feel like whenever someone writes shirou he is either OP genius or he is just so pathetic you want to wring his neck and put him out of his misery (cough cough THAT fic which shall not be named). I mean he isn't incompetent, he's shown to be a good fighter, but it's real stupid of him to have done that shit with kiri. I think telling him he is his son from the future and warning of the corrupted grail would have gone way better.
As for the gathering of the servants, meh. It isn't all that interesting of a scene as it basically follows the canon scene to the T and shirou kinda shows how stupid he is, again, by revealing his abilities. Well, I hope the reveal will have downstream effects and we see changes in the story.
Anyways, the most commendable part of this chapter was then end when shirou gave artoria an avalon. It was sweet and beautiful, but again there needs to be downstream effects. In canon kiri didn't know avalon's true power in the hands of saber (or her 'husbando' shirou) so I wonder if he would learn thanks to this event and how will he react to it, or will you take the boring route and not change shit.

Please Update!

Such a sad chapter, when I think what Shirou will feel when his god Father do something like this.

It became a clusterfuck now since Shirou come hahaha

Kerry Kerry Kerry, why do you have to embody your dual origins?

A nice break from all the action :)

And is that Waver x Taiga shipping I see?

Damn Shirou, save some awesome for the rest of them

I hope you pick up this story again. Just starting and it's great

Was kinda hoping Shirou would team up with team Rider, but I can't wait to see how he handles Team Kiri

Before chapter 8, the story was quite goid and addictive, until you finally introduce the whole bad end route shit.

More importantly there are too many plot hole, especially about Luca.
Are you sure he was Shirou before he lose his memory? Unlikely in my opinion.

How the f*ck Luca can cooking when in canon Shirou was only start learn cooking after knowing Kiritsugu's cooking was suck?

And Luca was being annoying by didnt know his place, as weakling he should obediently go home and take care of his mother instead of being nosy and got involved with Servant fight and become a burden for everyone.

Anyway, this whole story was quite good until you ruin it by introducing Luca to join the fray.

Honestly, it will be much better if you made Shirou reincarnated to the past instead of introducing the whole Luca bullsh*t.

That way, we will be able to have the story where Shirou had a warm family with his mother while he also relearn his magecraft to strengthen himself for preparation on Fourth Holy Grail War.