Reviews for A Chaotic Chaos Illness |
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Guest chapter 3 . 3/6 Please finish! |
The Dragon Legend chapter 1 . 6/6/2018 *opens story *winces Oh dear. First of all, paragraphing. New paragraph every time there's a new speaker. Those unwieldy blocks of text are a serious turn off. Second of all, proofreading. Do it. Just because any old so-and-so can post their work on here for free is no excuse to be lazy. Third of all, flyed? Flyed!? Just no. |
Dream7896 chapter 1 . 5/19/2018 Please continue, it's amazing |
karygarcia21 chapter 1 . 5/17/2018 I like your fic, i will wait the next chapter |