What. Just. Happened. Poor Mikey... and Raphie... and leo... Ah! I don’t know what to say... that was really good. But also really sad... Poor Donnie’s all alone... *sniffle*

Wow! I really, really liked this. I liked the way you wrote the brothers’ dialogue at the beginning - i felt it was very in character. And your Shredder was so evil... wow, what he did to Donnie was torturous. He shouldn’t underestimate him next time, that’s for sure. Good job on this

hola que tal.

guaooooooooo excelente. que tristeza senti al leer esto. maravilloso. me llego al alma. eres fantástica escritora sabes llegar al lector.

me hiciste llorar y mucho, eso demuestra que tienes un gran talento. pobre donny senti mucha pena por el.

si, nos veremos muy pronto.

Don't mind me ima just go sit in the corner and bawl my eyes out thanks very much