I read the first couple of chapters and I must confess it was weird reading smut about Elliot and Kathy, I don't think I'd ever given a chance to a story where they were the main pairing. But you got me curious about this story, and now I'm curious to know what you'll do next, and how Olivia will come into the picture. Intriguing!

Please update soon. I'm so nervous for Olivia

These is so good. I can't wait for more. I hope the baby is not Elliotts. But if it is I hope he doesn't pick kathy. He can still take care of the baby just not her.

This is getting suspenseful.
Honestly, Maureen was probably someone else’s kid

I hope that the baby not ellottt even if the show he is the baby daddy hope in this story not the daddy.

Can't wait for the next chapter.

Thank you for updating stay safe stay blessed

Can't wait to see who the father of the baby is! I have my own theories but I'm sure that there will be a plot twist in there somewhere ;)

Well this chapter has me even more convinced that Elliot isn’t the father. Like Chris said in her review I did feel some sympathy for kathy in a way. Still, I’m really hoping that Elliot isn’t the father. He’s Olivia’s only chance at getting away from her mother. I’m looking forward to the next chapter :)

Wow! Wonderful chapter in a wonderful story! Can’t wait to see what happens next!

I have mixed feelings regarding Kathy with this chapter. I want to give her some degree of sympathy, because to be in a place emotionally that she'd resort to the extremes she did means she's clearly not in a good place. However, the tough spot she's in is a web entirely of her own making. It's very much a double edged sword. I do believe her father was being a bit harsh with her given the circumstances - no matter what she's done, it wasn't the time or place to yell at her in such a way. The hospital environment did seem to provide them with one convenience though - the ability to get the testing done. I hope that Elliot's gut beliefs are confirmed, and he is not the father of this child. For Kathy's sake, though, I do want whomever the father is to step up and support her. Despite all this, even if Elliot is proven not to be the father, it won't change Serena's opinion of him one bit. Olivia will still have to sneak around, and if her mother ever finds out about the two, all hell is going to break loose. I still wonder what would happen if Elliot ever learned that Serena was the one responsible for the cut on Olivia's cheek. Yes, Serena apologized to her daughter, but after a awhile, especially in a cycle of abuse, apologies just seem hollow. Anxious to see what happens, but will patiently wait as long as it takes to find out!

Wow! Sounds like Kathy knows the baby isn’t Elliot’s. I really, really hope it’s not! Elliot and Olivia have enough to deal with.

Pleaseeeee don’t let it be Elliots. Sorry future Maureen but we don’t want you in this fic!

Still like liv mom go away she can liv with Munch, Cragen, McCoy or the Stablers anyone safe

Oh please, lol. We definitely don't want to wait 6 months. I'm hoping the father is some other boy, not Elliot or Nick. I think that would really shake things up a bit.

Lots to unpack in this chapter!

Glad nick agreed to the paternity test even though he seems adamant the baby isn’t his. It does make me wonder like someone said, maybe it’s not his OR Elliot’s. Hmm

Also this might sound embarrassing lol, but I learned something new because I actually hadn’t learned that pregnancy could occur before someone ‘got off’. I thought they had to...you know...finish in order to fertilize the egg.

I liked Liv and El’s small scene in the hallway. His sweet reassurance and the I love yous. Cute

But the ending, woah. I’m interested to learn more about why she did that. I hope it’s nothing darker like she got pregnant from an assault and was scared to tell everyone so she let them think it was el or nick’s (maybe I watch too much SVU) could also be a different reason.

Looking forward to the next chapter :)

more please