| Reviews for Third time's the charm? |
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   PrincessMagic chapter 12 . 8/6/2018 Wow wow wow wow wow! Loved the breakdown and now it was from Stephen's point of view! |
| heartnut chapter 12 . 8/3/2018 Perfection. Brilliant inner dialogue for such a crucial scene for Dr. Strange. |
| Snowbeardolphin chapter 12 . 8/3/2018 I like how you wrote chapters one through twelve. I like that Loki was brought back. Jen |
| AnnaTheEmporium chapter 11 . 7/28/2018 Nice |
| AnnaTheEmporium chapter 10 . 7/21/2018 You are such a great writer, please continue ! |
| heartnut chapter 8 . 6/30/2018 I think this story has a very interesting premise. I am very interested in seeing where the story goes. Very good character dialogue, and Hela's inner monologue in chapter 7 was fantastic. You might try reading aloud for your grammar and homophone mistakes, unless you get a beta for that. Well done. |
| PrincessMagic chapter 7 . 6/24/2018 Okay, wow, this is fantastic! |
| blueberryblueberry chapter 4 . 5/30/2018 Hela, whyyy? I love your story btw, love how this starts with team loki meets team stark instead of team thor or cap like most fanfics |
| imagine forevermore chapter 1 . 5/29/2018 This is something else, but not in a sarcastic way but in a real I don't know how to describe the deep emotions I'm feeling for Loki. |
| ZeroNoGame chapter 4 . 5/29/2018 Oh no, Hela ! |
| angelofthelord00 chapter 3 . 5/25/2018 why did you stop? this story was great! you're okay? |
| angelofthelord00 chapter 3 . 5/24/2018 odin Kind of is the worst dad, isn't He? I think all hela really wants is to be accepted.. |
| Charn chapter 2 . 5/21/2018 Please continue |
| ZeroNoGame chapter 1 . 5/16/2018 continue please |
| Gara chapter 1 . 5/15/2018 Dear no! I dont want loki to have kept on dying! This makes it all much sadder! T~T |
