my eyes are watering happily thank you so much for writing this

Yeah a second chapter! Very good and realistic written. At least Ayano’s father get a happy ending. I wonder how Ryoba will react and it will unfold.

One of the best fanfics I’ve read. Hands down. Amazing character study on someone we as the player don’t even know yet, but somehow despite this you make us sympathize with Mr. Aishi. Absolutely fantastic

Quite unique, and an enjoyable story.

Actually, the name is spelled "Jun'Ichi" not "Junichi." The apostrophe implies the pronunciation is "june-eechee," while without the apostrophe, it's "joo-nee-chee." No hard feelings, just wanted to tell ya.

This is beautifully written, so dark and horrorfic! I was feeling things, reveling in sympathy for Junichi! This might be one of the best fanfictions I've ever read about Yandere Sim. I would be ecstatic if you turned this into a two-shot, writing about his feelings while raising Ayano and seeing the symptoms of a yandere rise from her, screaming in denial that there's nothing wrong with her when the doctor's day that she cannot feel. Ah! I just love this so much, sorry for rambling! Also, can I use the name "Junichi" for the father in my fanfic? I think it fits him and his circumstances so well.

I enjoyed your story, the premise of the 1-shot was interesting, it leaves one wondering if the father was able to succeed. If you were to continue off from this one shot it would be a story worth following to see how Ayano’s childhood development would be. Good luck with your future writing!