This story aahhh I loved it! Love how we came full circle with Lisanna narrating both the Prologue and Epilogue. I enjoy how you navigated her mind while also giving us amazing Nalu and Lucy being incredible! Lucy’s journey to grow stronger was amazing to see and I appreciate how the root of her decision to temporarily leave made so much sense. Nalu never really have serious moments of conflict between them in canon so seeing it here was super interesting. Also the little sprinkles of humor all throughout the story made me smile so much

Great story! Couldn’t stop reading it loved the different POV and the storyline. Thank you so much for sharing. Hope your wedding day was magical!

Lis is a jerk

Only two chapter in a few years this story had my emotions all kinds of crazy. Can’t wait to keep reading

i'm also lowkey afraid what lisanna meant by "pay"

you're getting married! omg even though that was . a year ago now, congratulationssss

i love how you handled it!

ok. i am like. on the edge. you are actually right, lisanna probably feels more replaced... i empathise but i also don't. like natsu's line of thought was right... ish. and your author's note made me feel a tad bit more bad for her than i was feeling. you're a really good writer and i really like how i;m sort of on the edge about hating lisanna because i don't wanna hate her but i can't condone her either. ahhhh dead. i love this. lisanna is cray cray and i see where she's coming from but i find it somewhat hard to sympathise... a little bad? yes. but like... IDK HOW DARE YOU MAKE ME FEEL SO TORN. you're just that good ugh [ also gajeel... lmaooooooooooo. that was so slippin cute ]

i feel so awful. i am like an evil person... i couldn't stop cackling throughout at how lisanna was going to react (like i think i would've felt genuinely bad for her if she hadn't had borderline psycho thoughts lmao. and also.. an interesting thing i forgot to mention last chapter, i loved how lucy was giving a sad smile but lisanna interpreted that as a malicious smile pointed at her... that was really good, oof)

i would like to thank you for not stretching the whole thing to unnecessarily... i like how to the point you are in terms of the plot! xox

jesus fuck lisanna is coming off as a psycho... um... i am worried. but YAY at least lucyxnatsu are in the clear and they know how the other feels... UNLESS lisanna does something omggg

omg for a second i was terrified that natsu would want to get the memory of that kiss erased... so glad that didn't happen omg i would've been mad as hel alskkjdkdj

oh dear... mhm officially don't like lisanna the second she started calling lucy names. what in the... oh boi i feel evil but i hope she gets what's coming to her for being so awful. poor natsu ahhhh

oh dear i knew the second the letter came lisanna would not hand it over... welp there goes my sympathy. i don't like her. i feel bad for her yes, but when people decide and make decisions for someone else.. no ma'am... i really like the pacing of your story and how you're giving time for lucy to develop! xox

aw man what're you doing making me feel sad for lisanna ! :O but i love this fic. the premise is so fresh and i love how unique it has been so far... that there wasn't a misunderstanding, that those two communicated despite being angry, and that instead of being angry that she kissed him and left he's just indignant. i like this so much hueuhehu