Makoto, ever heard an old saying "You meet your destiny right on the road of evading it"? Or at least watched Revenge of the Sith, Anakin falls to the Dark Side and gets Padme killed because he wants to keep her alive. You should keep yourself away from girls if you envision your involvement with girls will end badly, instead of steping in to fix it, it's a trap!

Shame, Makoto Ito is supposed to be a good person, he’s talented in many things, like culinary skill and fashion design, he is a good student too, and unlike those punks of his age, he is obedient and good-behaved. He could have many possibilities in his future, but the company deliberately messes up his life. Sorry pal, you don’t deserve the mess they throw to you.

I cannot believe that this story hasn't more reviews! I think this is a story that everyone familiar with School Days has been wanting to read/write (besides ways to off Makoto, LOL): Makoto being forced to experience the consequences of his bad decisions, whether or not they've happened yet.

I hope we see more School Days stuff from you!

AY! ME ENCANTO, ME ENCANTOOOOO MUCHOOOOO
ESTA HERMOSO! Seguire otros trabajos tuyos aqui en este foro, saludos!
y espero no dejes de escribir! lo haces muy bien! ;D

justo cuando pensaba que todo se habia solucionado para bien de todos ellos ¡pase eso! nooooooo

ooohhhhh Hotonoha es hermosa, lastima que todo se fuera a la fregada! xd y pensar que Sekai pudo haberlo evitado siendoi mas amiga de Makoto y no ayudando lo con Katsura, pero ella sola se condeno a ser solo la otra

noooooooooooooo
todo acabara en tragedia!

oye eres bueno con esto de escribir! logro ponerme en el lugar de ese muchacho , que dicho sea de paso detesto, jejejjejjee
saludos y no te rindas!

Veri n1c3Dcest0riN2

Considering that the 0verflow universe is, under the surface, quite a horror setting involving mind control, various forms of abuse and descent into madness à la Vampire: The Masquerade/Ghouls: Fatal Addiction (Look up the Zantosa revenant family, and the facts concerning Clan Giovanni, especially the mortal relatives) from White Wolf's Old World Of Darkness, School Days deserves to be called a horror story in its own right, when you delve under the surface, by piecing together disassociated knowledge of the other games and seeing the hidden madness.

And considering who Makoto's father was, he was never really an average, normal boy, having the same potential to become a monster like his sire and the worst of his half-brothers.

When it comes to Taisuke Sawanaga, one could consider him a potential tragic monster, considering what Kei Ogata did to him as a child.

Not to nitpick, but in Summer Days/Shiny Days it was revealed that it was Haramidai that was the posh neighbourhood of Haramihama where Kotonoha and her family lived. And Itaru is his full-blooded sister actually.

The last part was pretty ironic, seeing that Makoto was hallucinating the bad timeline where Sekai "helped" Kotonoha "catch" the train.