hamuko with ken?

my imagination of hamuko being spirited kind girl as a perfect well mannered has been crushed by this... not that i didn't like the fanfic. i just not like much of hamuko being dirty mouthed, yeah, it destroyed my imagination of her.

What a good fanfic! It's just fun and I can't help but read it over and over again.

Every day I look to see if you have already updated, since anxiety kills me from just waiting to just wait for the next chapter!

Wow. This is getting REALLY GOOD! I hope to see more soon!

Glad to see this story is not dead.

Really looking forward to Hamuko's social link events.

Well it's been a long time, but I'm glad to see the story still continues. Hamuko beating them around isn't really satisfying in my opinion; she's had who knows how much experience, they've had mere days. I could have skipped that scene and still known precisely what happens.

This isn't a writing deficit. It's not even bad writing. But if Nyx pulling out the metaphorical popcorn was supposed to be indicative of what you want your readers to feel, for me personally, that fell flat.

But they are learning, and I bet next chapter they'll land a hit. And that, will be satisfying. Especially after all her trash talk.

I'm so happy to see this story continue. keep up the great work!

Honestly loving how it's going so far. Hamuko is kinda scary at times and very funny at others, and I can't wait to see where you go with this. (And I wonder when the whole 'The Arcana is the Means which all is revealed' stuff will start haha. maybe she'll do that for stalling Izanami when Izanagi no Okami is in the process of being made. would kinda like to see that. Hamuko-Nyx Avatar telling Izanami 'No matter who you are, Death awaits.')

That was such a sweet scene with Kanji and Hamuko. Keep up the good work.

Woah, ok. Hamuko is scary. In the first chapter you went form Hamuko to Minato and then back to Hamuko. I’ve only seen you do this once though so that’s good to see.I also appreciate the fact that your not making Hamuko blaze through the TV world. Her self restraint is much appreciated. Overall, an amazing story with a fun premise. And In My opinion Hamuko is more fun to write than Minato/Makoto is and I really like your rendition of Hamuko so far!

Hamuko, chill...

I honestly thought you won:t update this frequently, glad i was wrong

And its a good thing Hamuko didn't just bulldozing the dungeon XD

I am really happy that you are updating this frequently. Always great to see her adventures continue. And in such an unique way. I think so far, this is the only fic running with this concept.

Happy to see another update so promptly! You are really on a roll. Love the interactions and I eagerly await the next!

This would be interesting IF Hamuko don't curse in every sentence.. fuck this and fuck that, shit this and shit that.. It's ruining her image.. Sorry, but I really can't stand a Main character that use curse words everytime she open her mouth..