This is a good story. you got me nodding and yessing and smiling

Even though you'll never finish this, it was still really good. And I'm really sad I'll never get to see the OchaIzu in action

Dude you cold at least put in the description, or the title that you discontinued it. Not just HAHAHAHA COMPLEAT! cause I clicked hoping to actually finish a good story (don’t get me wrong this was really good) but I was disappointed.

I don’t know why you dislike this story personally this is easily some of the best work for mha on this site as I reread it again this is a really good story imo

Wut?

thanks for the chap and i think this one is better than the v2

I still honestly don’t understand why you dislike this story. The concept was interesting and the relationships you were building were appealing, especially how Ochako seemed to be the one gunning for a romantic relationship with Izuku. I am still curious as to why Izuku seemed to be reacting so ‘poorly(?)’ to Ochako’s initial advances, but chalk it up to his lack of positive social life and earlier experiences. I had been hoping to see what you had in store for the kids and how you were planning to make use of Ochako’s newly minted Force Manipulation quirk, as I’ve always felt there was more to her quirk then what we normally see.

Hmm, I'm not sure if this is you posting the last bit of this story you had written or if you're starting it up again. Either way, I'm glad to have been able to read it. Thank you for the entertainment! I especially loved the fluffy moments between Izuku and Ochako. :D

I'm surprised to see this updated!
Albeit given how the last official chapter ended off I'm assuming this is a retcon?
It seems so as well as kind of rushed given the title and lack of authors notes.
I'm always down to help this story find its footing if you want it.

its spelled angry not angery btw... thought you might like to know that

Maybe nerf the villains a little in the rewrite? I mean, petrifying by eye contact, and being able to cause literal cataclysms is a bit OP. Cataclysm especially since it seemed as if the user of the quirk did it very very casually and then he just left easily without anyone noticing. Also having Tomura be a freaking gorgon seemed way too hax as there isn't really a way to prep for a guy who can oneshot people like that. I loved the relationship between Ochako and Izuku, probablyone of the best I've seen on this site, if not the best. The 'tunnel vision' Izuku seems to have with his quirk is very in character as Izuku is very one trackminded before he learns Full Cowl with Gran Torino, and even after that Izuku can still be very uncreative for such a smart guy. I loved the personality you gave Izuku in this one with the confidence of having his own quirk and how he almost completely erases the person he used to be to become something better with the help of his friends.

Didn't Izuku duke it out with Nomu for a while in front of everyone? And 'escape' the Hero Killer? It seems weird that everyone is in consensus about Bakugo and Todoroki being so much stronger than everyone else in class when Izuku pretty soundly beat Bakugo in training as opposed to canon where Izuku barely survived. Just a thought.

I'm going to miss this - I can never seem to get enough Quirk!Izuku fics, especially if they're my favorite pairng: IzuOcha.

But I will check out the new version.

Se here's the thing with overpowered characters, they are not inherently bad, infact, well written overpowered. characters(Saitama)are far more interesting than the same shounen shit I've seen for years.

I can understand not wanting Izuku to curb stomp everyone, but I think it’s arguably worse when a writer gives him a badass quirk in addition to ofa and he still struggles just as much as in canon fights. Hopefully this story won’t end up doing that.