Reviews for The Rise of the One True Potter
Ashkan Dehno chapter 5 . 7/5
Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so farDamn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far
MystiYew chapter 1 . 2/23
So Ron blows up at Harry for literally no good reason at all, Harry is descended from the Blacks, Peverells, Founders, Pendragons, Le Fays, and fucking Merlin. He's also seven ft tall with white hair and a pony tail, and ooh he's a dragon lord. Now he carries a 6ft staff that's op as shit and a magic sword that's better than goblin-make. What's that? He's a magical animagus with at least half a dozen forms? Wow! Oh look magic tattoos for no reason and a deus ex passage way into the castle! Oh also he doesn't care about ginny at all and only thinks of hermione who he, to be fair, loved as a teen. But not a single word for his actual wife who died? Oh and look, he's now snogging Greek goddesses for once again, no reason. Oh lookie, time to save mummy potter's soul! I bet we can get her a body later too.

It's like you have a check list of clichés. If you had taken the time to develop any of these ideas it probably would've been OK at least, instead you've just thrown them in willy nilly in a boring already done format. You've just told us the bare minimum without explaining anything. Even if I were to take it at face value, which I can't, it's just so... Silly.

It would actually be an interesting read if you got rid of like half of the bs, had harry undertake an epic quest to the North and overcome challenges to get his strength, only for it to be for nothing and has to go back in time to save everyone.

Also 'people will see you differently', considering the tags you've put on and the story so far, it's a really thinly veiled excuse for him to get in everyone's panties. I'm not against reading trashy harems, it's a guilty pleasure, but really? May as well give him magic pheromones that make women want to jump his bones.
hotprincesseve chapter 5 . 11/22/2019
Pls update This
Warmaster Koss chapter 4 . 11/12/2019
I think you need to re-read your story because it seems like you forgot some of what you wrote in the previous chapters.
Mark Juan chapter 1 . 11/11/2019
nice
Guest chapter 4 . 9/2/2019
Please update
It is an amazing story
dcoon chapter 4 . 8/11/2019
you could also add campione to the list of crossovers so if he ever kills a male god he can obtain their powers and skills.
Stephen chapter 4 . 3/8/2019
What Happened After That Please Update The Story Soon.
Stephen chapter 4 . 2/12/2019
What Happened After That Please Update The Story Soon.
Stephen chapter 4 . 1/29/2019
What Happened Next With The Story And Please Update The Story.
Stephen chapter 4 . 1/29/2019
What Happened Next And Please Update The Story.
The Dark Dragen chapter 4 . 1/18/2019
Great story mate, glad you're keeping on writing, can't wait for the next update.
god of all chapter 4 . 1/18/2019
Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon.
adbelvd chapter 4 . 1/18/2019
Good Chapter, althought, it's been a while since you last update.
alec-potter chapter 4 . 1/17/2019
Nice chapter but you are mixing in too many different stories.
If you have a detailed plot already defined then awesome else you are just going to reach a point of no return in terms of plot holes and inconsistencies. Other than non-canon HP, you have already included Greek mythology and already hinted on few more. May end up being a recipe for disaster.
Lemons, specially with MILFs, are always great but hope you have taken a backup on this story.
Keep writing.
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