| Reviews for The Monster Of Fenrir |
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Kamizuma24 chapter 2 . 6/21 This story belong to the Trash |
Dakumun chapter 10 . 5/27 Naruto’s power/ability remind me a lot of prototype, besides that I honestly thought his ability’s would be much different but I still enjoyed the story |
Dasgun chapter 10 . 5/27 .-. .-. |
triscythe59 chapter 10 . 5/26 Congratulations with having your baby girl! I pray that you and your family stay safe and healthy! |
Have a Little Feith chapter 9 . 4/16/2019 Oi, geez. The anime doesn't particularly follow canon events, to try to cram as much of the game's evens into a short period of time. I mean, it doesn't even have that many episodes. That and the game has people being picked out by computer, not by some stupid patch that wouldn't even work the way the anime creators think it should. I guess that's why they didn't want to do the second game as an anime, the original main base is a freaking mobile city! They wanted to keep it as realistic as they could get, is my guess. |
YeTianshi chapter 6 . 3/9/2019 That explanation didn't make much sense to me... I mean yeah Naruto needs biomass, anyone that has played Prototype understands that point, but he doesn't just "run out" over time, he'd have to be damaged or something. Even then a surplus of biomass or a spontaneous change in composition shouldn't cause him to lose consciousness, especially considering he doesn't have a functioning brain or organs to begin with. |
YeTianshi chapter 5 . 3/9/2019 Why did Naruto collapse? Was that just for dramatic purposes? Because I don't think it makes much sense otherwise. |
YeTianshi chapter 4 . 3/9/2019 It seems a bit foolish of Leah to give Naruto's sample like that though... I mean that's generally how weaknesses are found and clones are made. Not that I think they could pull off a cloning process, but they could definitely workout some weaknesses to use against him should it ever become necessary. |
YeTianshi chapter 3 . 3/9/2019 It honestly seems weird that he's only able to make claws so far. I mean Alex had the virus for a lot less time and he figured out how to make an entire armory with it. |
YeTianshi chapter 2 . 3/9/2019 Called it, he killed everyone at his first base eh xD Really liking the fic so far, though it would definitely be better if you explained the details more, I mean for example as far as I could tell Tsubaki was there when Naruto called Leah "mother" so did she not hear him? Why else would she decide that she needs to find out what their "connection" is? |
YeTianshi chapter 1 . 3/9/2019 Huh... so put aside the whole cruelty part on the account of the mother (some mothers can be like that, and being raised in a world full of monsters didn't do her any favors), is she retarded? You make a weapon like that, no love at all involved, it's only a matter of time before that weapon is turned not against your enemy, but upon yourself instead. And then everyone will enjoy the irony of being slayed by that which they created to slay their enemies xD |
NecrorexSparda Juubi-No-Kishin chapter 9 . 2/27/2019 Hmm, welcome back. Awesome chap, and i can visualise the fight. By the way who would win in a fight this naruto or Alex mercer, and/or james heller. Also if you could, would you want a genuine God arc? |
Guest chapter 9 . 2/27/2019 love it |
Banjo the Fox chapter 1 . 2/27/2019 I wanted to like it... but fuck, you made Kushina way too dark, evil, uncaring and it's just... no. |
Naruto x sister the best XD chapter 9 . 2/27/2019 Cool update , keep up the good work |