So far so good, interested to see what happens next.

I'm pretty sure ww1 era pepole didn't know elves the way they are right now, since it was Tolkien wjo "reformed" the fantasy races such as dwaves, hobbits and, you guessed it, elves. Good story tho...

Also, Y'all gotta see this cliche

This is an amazing idea and really well written, I hope you do more!

Hey, i just saw this and got hooked! It's too bad that each chapter is too short. Anyways looking forward to the next chapter!

Also, are you still accepting OCs?

well looks good

Not bad story thus far, I truly like the unique idea of a Gate story taking place during the First World War as it opens so many opportunities to explore of these two worlds clashing at such a time of war and change that it's interesting to now consider how this will now affect Earth's timeline now that the Gate is there and of course what nations are gonna become vastly interested in the resources and etc in Falmart.

But only have few complaints, I like the story and what you done but I can't help but feel some of it is little rushed, I just cannot see the Central Powers and the Allies just right away accepting truce or just disregarding national uniforms like that, afterall we gotta remember there were far more complicated things going on in background of the war with politics, national pride, conquest, and etc like example I don't see the Ottoman Empire giving off their ambitions anytime soon, if anything I wouldn't be surprised if Empires like the Ottomans decide to take advantage of lack of attention on them and continue their interests.

Or there's current President Wilson of America, no offense meant of course but from what I understand from American friends of my, President Wilson was not one of best Presidents there ever was and in fact Wilson great deal of issues and problems with his policies, not to mention his actions in putting American soldiers in the Russian Civil War after the First World War that costed great deal of lives in a war they didn't had any business being in, and I will not be surprised if Wilson or any other notable incompetent Allied or Central Power leaders do something in this Gate situation that's gonna bite them in the ass. But again this is just from my understanding, I just think there's gonna be lot of buzzy activity going on in political section.

But overall I like the rest of stuff you put in. If you don't mind me asking but I wouldn't seeing the other nation soldiers in the story like Canada for example, Canadian Soldiers were actually some of the most feared and skilled soldiers in both of the World Wars, thousands of Canadians gave their lives in famed battles like the Ypres Raid, Battle of Somme along with their French and Indian allies, most infamous the Battle of Vimy Ridge where my great great grandfather had actually fought in, the Battle of Passchendaele, and of course the Hundred Days Campaign where the Canadians made the push and turn the tide of the war. Canadians were actually very ruthless in the war too, they were very known for actually not taking prisoners and the Germans had grown actually fear these soldiers and I wouldn't be surprised if there's still ongoing issues considering but yeah if there's definitely one nation the Saderans will grow to fear, the Canadians are among the list. There's also unfortunately forgotten history of how many minorities were fighting in the Canadian army, these were people that didn't had the right to vote in Canada due to still presented racism in political sections but all the same these individuals were some of the most bravest men the Canadian army ever saw, one of the most famous of course being the Native Canadian sniper, Francis Pegahmagabow, Francis I in most definitely see is gonna earn himself a famed reputation in this new war. But either way these Japanese Canadians, Black Canadians, Chinese Canadians, Indian Canadians, and others including European descent were unfortunately forgotten in history, including their sacrifices to be accepted by a country that saw them as Aliens. If the subject here interests ya, here's a link here, apologies if there's any issues.

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"Canadians Change When they Hear War"

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Hope the links work, all in all I figure the subject might interest you.

Also very curious to see if the famed Red Baron will make his appearance here, always found it truly amazing that it was actually the Allies who handle his funeral out of respect to this young man who was their enemy and friend, Manfred was truly one of a kind man and its unfortunate to think that he was only 25 when he was shot down by Roy Brown. But again up to you since its story but it be quite something to see the Red Baron going up against say the Flame Dragon XD

Overall yeah, promising story, just maybe don't be afraid take more time developing out the world here, definitely curious to see what's going on with the politics that's erupting with the Gate's discovery or if civilians are even aware what's going on now if governments are trying to keep tight lips on this new conflict. Or what kind of encounters the Earther soldiers are gonna have, while it can definitely be truly said there were unspeakable horrors that went on in the war and for the Great War to be called *The War to end all wars* was truly one of biggest lies of the century, but now for these German, British, American, Canadian, Japanese, French, Prussian, Chinese, Hungarian, Australian, Russian, and etc to now enter a whole new world of magic and fantasy, their definitely gonna be facing levels of barbarism that will truly shock them to the core and to think such similar things did indeed happened in their own timeline but for now to see themselves, the level of atrocities by the Saderan Empire, especially by that arrogant piece of shit Prince Zorzal, like the genocides, the raping, the slavery, and etc by them I'm sure is gonna inbuilt a hatred within the Allied/Central Powers soldiers in their exploration in Falmart and some of course eerily ironic considering but all the same I definitely see the Saderans are really gonna be in for war of the likes they have never seen before. Also curious of what kind of races or factions the Allies will actually make friendly establish relations, be quite something to see those Werewolf mercenaries fighting alongside these soldiers XD

Overall wish ya luck man, quite curious to see where things will go for your characters and here's one last link to a video I'm sure quite fits the soldiers journey through Falmart and the conflict their about to enter with Saderan Empire. Till next time
PAR KOTE BAL IJAAT BE MAND'ALOR!

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"Sabaton: The Great War"

well a bit short but still nice chapter

exactly how you bribe kids

showing Duran before after pictures of battlefields or demonstrations of gas would probably also have demonstrated the power of earth.

well nice chapter also good in how you showed the soldier s remembering what they did and what they want. anyway keep going

Woohoo!

When the Saderan is the one being outnumbered.
Damm that WW1 ball of steels for ya

well a nice chapter

well a bit short but still nice chapter,

Sadly short, happy to update.

Though oddly enough when thinking of this story I can't help but imagine all the Sabaton music playing. For example:

The Future of Warfare:
Have a whole line of soldiers near a clearing hear the roar of dozens of tanks as they here the intro voice (you can hear it at the beginning of the 'Historical Versions' of the songs') before a battle takes place.

Ghost of the Trenches:
Have a select few go behind enemies lines of the Empire and instill terror at unseen killers

Attack of the Dead Men:
In a ironic twist, have a group of Russian and German soldiers unleash clouds of gas upon a enemy fortress as the dying warriors witness the enemy charge through a cloud of death.

Devil Dogs:
For them American bois