I really enjoyed those scenes between Goten and Bulla in her early years, they were very cute :) And I think it's totally believeable that she'd have the poor guy wrapped around her finger from a young age. I bet she's going to be a queen of manipulation once she's older in Super.

This is one of the most adorable gotenbra fanfic I've ever read

I enjoyed this story and all, and thought it was pretty well written, but at thr age 17 part Bulla just camr off as way more stalkerish. That's pretty much the only feeling i got fron her since the 15 part, but in the end it all worked out snd I did still like the way things went, so there.

This was awesome!

So good. I love this couple. Wish you write a lemon at the end but I still love it. You need to write a side story going on at the same time about Trunks and Pan.

Your writing is continuing to improve. I see that you put quite a bit of thought into this.

Admittedly while I find the story cute, this type of story is not quite one that I'm necessarily comfortable with, due to the age difference, especially with Goten actually babysitting Bra in her infancy to early childhood. However, what I do like about this is that it isn't done in a creepy fashion, as Goten points out their age difference multiple times, and clearly doesn't want to hurt her.

"I'm sorry Frieza bullied you." I about lost it at this line. XD

I like how Pan offers more of a grounded view of Bra's crush on Goten. She seems to be more emotionally mature of the two and she's being a good friend by being realistic.

Bra's teasing of Goten in the no-pants scene was funny, but Goten was also quite uncomfortable, so I'm a little divided on that scene.

The ending was cute!

I apologize if this sounds like I'm laying into you, but here are a couple of pieces of critique I want to offer:

-Please respell your title. It should be spelled "Relationship."
-Instead of "Video Games rots your mind" it should say "video games rot your mind"
-"Will you pleast" should be "Will you please"
-"When he saw GOten" should be "When he saw Goten"

Other note in super Bra was born without a tail and Toriyama confirmed that Goten Trunks and Pan were also born without tails(making Gohan the only tailed hybrid) after marking that the saiyans of universe 6 also lack tails because evolution
And also in super Vegeta also was noted to be protectige of Bra turning into super saiyan blue when she cried

Constuctive critic: super has confirmated that Pan is one and half years older than Bra

omg so sweet. i really liked it.

Really nice! Loved how sweet and adorable this was! Good job!