Don’t abandon

Keep going, this is great

ehh pretty much a Gary stu

Great story so far, keep up the good work!

When will you release another chap?

Love this fan fiction really wish you started it up again ! Love Jon being the main character he will be an incredible king. I love how he is OP in fighting but intelligence aswell. The expedition and the upcoming daynes is awesome. Please start up again if u do fan fiction still

i could have done without the evil villain conspiracy monologue. Really shines the Daynes in a horrible light.

Stannis might be a derp but he did respect Ned Stark. He would have inherently improved of Aerys' death regardless of how he died.

There's just so much wrong in your understanding of ASOIAF that it makes this hard to read.

Aww, please come back to this. I love Ashara Dayne! This story has wonderful potential.

But Aw, I wish that Lyanna Stark's child had lived. Were the Daynes responsible for that? Hopefully, everyone just thinks that the baby girl had died but is actually alive.

I can't wait for Jon's journey.

And hey, since Jon was never disinterited, will he challenge Robb to a duel for the position of Lord of Winterfell?

I'm glad that Jon is making Ned fortify the North. Smart. :)

Please update soon, please.

Huh - Aegon really is the PTWP, then?

Nice fix, hope you update. Look forward to Jon really taking off as an adult.

I’m more worried about skeletal damage from that load than anything else. Jon’s ten. He’s physically not built for that level of training yet. Couldn’t Arthur work him up a bit? Start with twenty pounds, say?

TEN?

Did you read the Dragon of the North, by any chance? Because that story (a quest on Spacebattles) has a similar scene, but Jon at least had Dragonborn shouts in that story.

How can a ten-year-old beat a grown man? Even Maegor, a freak of nature, took until he was twelve. Have you seen ten-year-olds? The poison is the only thing that makes it vaguely possible, so kudos for that. I’ll just pretend he opened with a lucky shot and spent the rest of the duel dodging while his foe lurched about under the increasing effects of the poison.

Other than that, this story is awesome. I love powerful!Jon stories. They’re all that makes the grinding, squalid grimdarkness of the canon tolerable.

whens the next update?

Nice story keep it up