Ahh this was lovely. I loved your take on Kaoru on All His Colors. And I really like it here too. I’m really enjoying reading your stories, they are very emotional and raw. :)

"the sweet smile of ocean blues" So good!

Very endearing, this chapter.

This chapter made me cry :( I hate it when Kaoru waits for Kenshin. She is such a strong woman.

This collection is really well written. Kaoru is so matured and strong here. I love your portrayal of Kaoru.

Job well done to you!

okay, I obviously need to go back and read the first one, lol. But your writing is still quite good. The repetition is very effective. and I'm intrigued now. :)

Oh, Lovely! And I'm so honored that you mentioned me in your note. *blushes*
Anyway, your writing is quite good, very visceral and very descriptive. I'm looking forward to the next chapter :)

Oh, keep on, please

Beautifully written. I love these quiet moments full of emotions. And I completely agree with youMamoro's are pure gold. No wonder they have inspired you

Again, such a tender moment between the two! His suffering, and his "ever-mysterious, unspoken thoughts"...
Yes, all of this feels right. ;)

A touching mix of tenderness, angst and a bit of arousal! Almost like if we had been invited on the intimacy of the couple. I'm absolutely following ;)

another wonderful chapter 3 well done! Great interpretion of the conflicts of emotions brought across!

Beautiful. More please!

Another job well done Sileavatar..i really love both of ur story..They're very much in character and i can really feel kenkao's deep love for each other in ur stories..keep up the good work and looking forward to read more of this story

that was gorgeous!