Reviews for Chaos Theory: Sarutobi Sasuke
Hekikuu chapter 1 . 6/17/2019
I love this! I actually just started reading it because it had Mitsuhide in it, but I live your SasukexMC ship! This could totally be canon! I'd love to see how you write a MitsuhidexMC fic, you seem to have him down pretty pat.
MostEvilIceQueen chapter 2 . 4/28/2019
'activities' snarled aloud *snicker*
oh how you kill me, Demon(is it ok if I call you that?)! *snickers some moreyou kill me yet I will still profess my impractical but undying love for you and that lovely, lovely brain of yours.
MitsuMoments are GOLD!
MostEvilIceQueen chapter 1 . 4/27/2019
ImpracticalDemon, I love you!
Favorited so fast at chest physicist wormhole hahaha
excuse me, I have to go back to reading the rest of the chapter/fic

oh, and did I mention I love you? Well, just to be sure, I love you!
Sarastrawberries chapter 5 . 2/19/2019
Wow this was so fantastic. I have been waiting and waiting for Sasuke’s route to open. This fic was so perfect. I really felt that you had the characters spot on. You are a wonderful writer. Love the steamy bits too! Thank you for this beautifully written fic. I hope you continue it!
MitsuFan chapter 5 . 10/10/2018
My brain... you broke it...

... This entire one-shot has turned Sasuke into my most anticipated upcoming route. I can't imagine that the official IkeSen writers would or could write anything better than this. Definitely favorite. Definitely. broke brain is amazing in this case. definitely.

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Little Town chapter 5 . 6/30/2018
That was so so so good oh my godddd I thirst so badly for sasuke snd this definitely helped to quench it omgggg. And your writing is so good! Tbh if you feel like it, you should totally write MC suckin sasuke's dick coz highkey I was thinking that the entire time in the last chapter ksjsjjd
Shell1331 chapter 4 . 6/17/2018
This is such a fun story! I confess to giggling at the “I hoped people would attribute my flushed face to the afternoon sun” and thinking “Not ole yellow eyes” And then BAM he showed up ;-) And of course I snickered a little bit more… Poor Chieko. I should not be so amused at Mitsuhide’s tormenting of her…
(and I dare say I wonder if her hypothesis of dark magic isn’t correct…)
I laughed out loud at the “sardonic” commentary…it was not only very “canon-esque” in terms of the MC but also somehow very *you* XD
Oh my god. Her thinking of him as “the reptile”….Chibi Imp…your bias is showing XD XD
I am very much intrigued to see how things play out with the ramping up of tension here and Mitsuhide having moved Chieko to a “very pretty potential cell” (shudder). I’m curious about just how far ole yellow eyes’s practicality will extend in regards to Sasuke…and also what Nobunaga will have to say about all of this… And then of course what will happen with Chieko and Sasuke…heehee. Great chapter! (errr, chapter part 1?)
Shell1331 chapter 3 . 5/22/2018
So I know I say this with your Hakuouki writing, but it would seem that it applies to this as well — this is so well done, you could just sneak this into canon (maybe as an event? Lol) and no one would be the wiser.
Love the idea of Shingen teaching Sasuke what to do with women (and the reference of the event of him teaching all the Sengoku guys).
They’re both so adorably awkward together at times :-) nice work on the steamy steamy kisses and I loved the little detail about him being familiar with female attire and training with some women shinobi (which of course made me think of both Kimigiku and Yamazaki...I would ask if you were planning a crossover but i don’t don’t that I want to encourage you to add anything further to your plate.
Cracked up at the exchange about anime oand the whole “Anime doesn't make it safer!"
This was fun—looking forward to seeing what happens in the epilogue?
Shell1331 chapter 2 . 5/21/2018
Great part 2! Lots of fun and humor throughout, but also good work with the storyline.
I loved the descriptions of some of the characters, like “white-haired Machiavelli” and “Azuchi's premier candy thief” lol
Can I just say that Chieko’s “Mitsuhide Rule Number One“ was a bit reminiscent of the whole “do not engage” :-) I can appreciate her difficulty in not following her rule.
Cracked up at her romantic self downing espresso (and then later sipping green tea) ;-) Definitely felt like you captured the sassiness of the MC and her inner monologue :-)
Love the inclusion of fanboy Sasuke (I mean, really, how can you not?) and I may have snickered out loud at the whole fist bump with Yukimura that I have doubt would probably look out of place in that era lol
Very very nicely done! Enjoying this story immensely
DancesWithSeatbelts chapter 3 . 5/20/2018
Nin nin. Lmao! And is "...you come first.. ." some sort of naughty promise?

A very hot kissing scene - Sasuke is quite the fast mover when spurred, eh?

Loved the book references and science-y bits.

I enjoyed all of it - keep up the fabulous work!
DancesWithSeatbelts chapter 2 . 5/20/2018
A fun second chapter! You really bring the Sengoku Warlords to vibrant life! You're making me Sasuke too.

I loved the special touches (TM) ~ I only wish I had the proper keyboard for that symbol.

You're bringing some serious anticipation to the next chapter. I enjoyed every witty word you wrote and I expect to love the conclusion whether or not it contains smexy shenanigans!
Shell1331 chapter 1 . 5/18/2018
This was so much fun! Great use of humor throughout (definitely cracked up at multiple spots — like the prospect of Ieyasu hiding behind Chieko’s kimono rack lol — I think you did a good job with the heroine’s voice here!). And I can 100% see Sasuke putting the Ieyasu-made cough drops in a special keepsake box lol he’s so adorably precious in his fanboying. But it was super cute that Sasuke had heard she was sick and was bringing her some ibuprofen that had managed to make it with him to the past (and of course gotta love that he was a tad too late so she’d already partaken of the happy lozenges).
Also, I love the inner monologue Mitsuhide and then the ambiguity of whether or not it was actually Mitsuhide (or if somehow he’s connected to her inner monologue/hallucination Mitsuhide) there at the end lol
Very nicely done! You should definitely continue this if you are so inclined ;-)