Hey I'm the guy that made the random way to beat Tartaros strategy earlier and I just realized another reason an member of the allies could pretend to betray the good guys and because a half demon in Tartaros is to counter memento Moiri (Mard Geers best curst that erases people) since it's only known weakness was other demons of those with demon Slayer magic

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question are you going to make use of the hogyoku fusion espada forms from brave soles? given the villains seem to have some one who likes to make other world stuff it seems posable for them to be used.

I'm just gonna say this cause I thought it was interesting but I personally think Tartaros should be up high on priority targets for the Allied forces when get any info in the cube because there guild is like the one exception to staying dead in this campaign. We have hells core which brings back any fallen members and Keyes who basically has his own edo tensei without the sacrifice needed which can bring back other fallen coalition soldiers if he gets their corpse somehow. And they can just get new members from other world's and give them curses and demon forms. This is random but my idea for taking them out would maybe be an important person in the alliance pulling a Gin Ichimaru and betraying the allies to join Tartaros and get a demon form claiming he believes it's the best way he'll survive the war I have no idea how he'll convince the coalition to believe him but after he becomes a demon he can use his new abilities to destroy hells core like Mira did and effectively even the playing field for the allies.

I CANNOT BELIEVE YOU LEFT US AT A CLIFFHANGER LIKE THIS! NOW I'M EVEN MORE IMPATIANT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER THEN BEFORE!
To put it more simple: Damn, you're good.

A very well timed and executed use of the Worf Effect. Still poor Garp but if Orihime or Tsunade get to him in time, I can see him surviving just fine. His combat ability is another matter.

Itan's a cool dude. He's fighting for what he believes in and even though he's on the wrong side I can see myself liking him.

Still it felt good to finally have an explaination on how Minato could possibly escape.

Looking forward to more.

Nice chapter woah Garp got nearly curb stomped, still nice way of showing of the power difference between the Circles and other worlders.

So is Minato going to be doing some world traveling ? I wonder if he and his group might bump to our WOD cast just a guess. Though will his group contain someone from each world?

All and All nice fight and set up chapter

Hey, so will the alliance depose of the world nobles when they win this campaign?

Wow, Go Garp! I think he would be awesome when we see him in a real fight in One Piece.

The most power flames of all time? Itan is really the best Circle that would switch sides at the end.

Also I have to question that? Baraggan's Young brother's fires can match is being as powers as the Greek Fire that never stop burning.

So the next two Arc be Sabaody and Mary Geoise right?

Wait Starrk is in the Holy Land right? The Primera going to get a awesome fight right? Will he finally get to see a Bankai please? He deserve it right?

As for who's at Sabaody, I can't wait to see how they need to fight to take it back too.

Keep the epic work up and I can't wait for this next two Arcs.

Hey I know you did bounties but you haven't mentioned the Coalition Blacklist in a while so I'm wondering if you will add more of those later because I'm curious who is considered more of a threat from coalition perspective. Personally a random person I'm curious of is Yoruichi because she's done her job and stayed subtle throughout this story aside from Orochimaru, I wonder if anybody on the Coalition side has plans for her.

Yeah...one does have to be strategic about applying the Worf Effect. But yes, your use of it was certainly effective. At the very least, Garp clearly showed that he's still among the BEST Haki users and fighters out there. Too bad, Hellfire is so OP!

As for Itan's character...you certainly showed that for all his noble and likable aspects, he's still someone who belongs amongst the Circles. I can certainly see how hypocrites would be a Berserk Button for him. But oh man...I just love the contrast between Itan's Hellfire and Uragiri's 'Black Ice'.

Oh man...at first, I thought you'd find some way to simply 'cut off' Mary Geoise (at least until Oda reveals more)...kinda like Gen. MacArthur did to that New Britain base with 100,000 Japanese. But then I realized that'd be like trying that tactic on Tokyo itself...so yeah, I'm not coming up with any better options. Even if there was a way to completely cut off the Holy Land (which I find doubtful with Watcher shenanigans)...no way the WG would ever let a 'siege' take place. But yeah, looking forward to seeing Ichigo, Natsu, and Sasuke and all the rest taking the fight to those Celestial Dragons! Should also be neat seeing the 2nd at Sabaody...sure that'd still be a fun fight!

Til Next Time...Have Fun! Stay Safe!

Excellent analysis of the worf effect. Yeah when the pyromaniac is the nice one you know your getting esdeath soon.

I honestly didn’t take into account how geography would factor in after tenrou, though now I have some suspicions about the forest of death.

KEEP BEING AWESOME!

Itan's art is simple, but brutally effective. It's like the Amaterasu, but probably better. At least, it seems to cause more permanent damage, and the flames themselves seem hotter. Poor Garp. He honestly did better than I expected, but at least it seems he'll be able to escape with his life. With the way Itan's art works, maybe even Orihime won't be able to restore him fully. At least, I'm sure Itan would have considered that before letting him live.

On the other hand though, the next big fight is shaping up to be something epic. I'll certainly be looking forward to that.

I loved this chapter and it cemented Itan as my favorite original character you’ve written. I expected Itan to win but I wish the fight was longer so we could’ve seen some more of Itan’s moves. I really want to see a scene of Luffy, Dragon, and Garp together.

Mary Geoise, The Holy Land, I can’t wait to see all these fleets working together and I personally want to see the 2nd Fleet in action because that one has my favorite characters.

I feel like taking Mary Geoise and even the whole One Piece world wouldn’t make the threat of the World Government go away but they wouldn’t be as big of a threat.

On another note, I’ve been practicing drawing and coloring. I feel like I’m doing good with faces but I would like to get better with drawing bodies before I draw any of your characters, I have been practicing faces though of what I think they would look like.

GOD BLESS YOU MATE AMAZING CHAPTER, YOU HAVE THE TALENT AND THE GIFT TO GIVE US MORE THAN WE CAN TAKE!
You gave us detail on Itan and your right, he is the type of villains you can like, his an anti-villain, I love how he respects people who followed there beliefs. I had a feeling he would respect Garp.
There fight was epic, expected with Itan winning but Garp surviving his attack was a shock. I had a feeling you wouldn't kill Garp that quickly after your first chapter of him in the story, but at the same time I couldn't help but worry for him. Hope to see Gol D Roger one day, I'm looking forward to it mate!

Now on to the new ARC MARY GEOISE!
I expected it, but not this soon!
And your right, it was unavoidable with the Holy Land location being close to the point between New World and Paradise. You would think a fight like this would be at the end of the campaign, but its good you also seeing from a realistic military standpoint. You can't leave a major enemy base on your way can you.
But your right on thinking if the Holy Land is taking the World Government will be collapse, and the Navy will be out of the Coalition. I can't wait to see how its done!

We will have 3 (or 4) Fleets coming in together to attack, hands down one of your challenging battles yet, and I'm looking forward to it. The only thing I'm worried about is one of the admiral, Ryokugyu, we don't have any info on his fighting abilities apart from his a "monster" which is a given for an admiral, but it would be nice for more details, but it is what it is.

Also personal favor, can you give out more quickly WG Bounties for the Alliance members, because once once the WG is taken down, the Bounites would be rendered invalid, so please add more before the WG is taken down. Crossing my fingers for the Leaders such as the Kages to take part too.

Hoping for the War of Discoveries chapter next and its not too far behind, thank you again for a great chapter, keep it up and stay safe mate!