dose tali find out !

Love it!

I want your Ima too, Tony screamed internally.

Priceless!

Fantastic! Ziva is alive. Tiva forever.

Cute story; just a side note. Tali was born in 2014, so in 2017, she would have been not quite three at Mothers' Day.

Nice. Thanks for posting

nice story
and for the French part... it was readable. Coming from a toddlers mouth
I would have rephrased some differently but was okay. Really.

f.e. the lady at the counter would most likely say "lequel aimeriez-vous avoir" ( reason, since the lady does not know tony and tali personally she keeps it at the polite form. The form you wrote is okay but is more like I would tell a friend or a relative).

le fraise: la fraise... ( fraise is female so: la) (le is for male)
Café Décaféiné is correct, there is a shorter word but it is not obligated

if a child/todler talks it is alright to use like you wrote since she is still learning.

Love this story! It's cute! Wish there had been more about what happened with Kort and how he threatened her though.

This was really good, I enjoyed the read!