| Reviews for While We're Young: Endless Summer |
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Guest chapter 16 . 9/20 Really loved this story. Particularly loved it between Nick, Judy and the twins. How long until next chapter because I am anxious to read more. |
Eris chapter 16 . 8/20 Very fascinating and exciting chapter. Hopefully they can save the pizzeria. Maybe some flyers? Please update soon. |
Mithendel chapter 16 . 7/14 Been loving reading this story. hope you keep up the awesome work and hope to see the next chapter soon! |
Shane Hedin chapter 16 . 6/29 Actually I have a couple ideas for this one besides the gang helping John and Frankie form a perfect anniversary I also have Nick returning a favor and through Judy a birthday party and also a beach day where the gang go's to the beach and maybe bring back that lion that falisha has a crush on and a drama chapter like a teen actor comes to zootopia named jack Savage I have seen a couple fanfiction with him in it and he has eyes on Judy and Nick gets jealous of him and trys to win her affection and tells her he loves her he may have told her he likes her but not love and maybe have audran be gay since u put divorce and abuse why not a gay character and how they r treated maybe ad Camilla be part of the group face it they need more girls and speaking of girls maybe get some love interest for the others like if u do ad Camilla to the group I can see her and darson be a thing I mean they have a lot in common so why not and how about ad that pracilla sloth girl in the actually movie be with flash and maybe Mimi and Mervin be together those two r wackos so why not I can see that work Benji got gazelle I've seen it in the movie but I don't know about Ronnie though u can think of something so what do you think about these ideas |
Shane Hedin chapter 16 . 6/26 I have a chapter idea for a two or three parter one how about Nick Judy and the gang find a way to help Nick's parents get the perfect wedding anniversary surprise since they got married in the summer and this is the least they can do for them |
Shane Hedin chapter 16 . 6/21 I agree with the guest guy can u make her part of there group u said it yourself that u need more girls |
Guest chapter 16 . 6/17 Hey do u think Camellia can be part of Nick and Judy's group they need more girls and she can fit right in with them |
Guest chapter 16 . 6/14 Maurizio said sounding angry. "All these years and you wait til now to pop up?" "Sorry. I've...been busy." John replied while twittering his fingers. All this should not be italicized, should it? |
Teller-Story chapter 16 . 6/14 "Weren't you guy paying attention?" Should be "Weren't you guys paying attention?" "I didn't even you had a kid." Should be "I didn't even know you had a kid." |
Guest chapter 16 . 6/14 'Mr. Coulizza said to him boldly.' Should be 'Mr. Coulizza said boldly.' |
Fox Keyblader Illusions Angel chapter 16 . 6/14 I feel bad for the small business that had to shut down. Can't get the virus at big business but you can get it in small business hence why they closed. Anyway great chapter and I enjoyed it. It's stupid for the hate for pineapple on pizza. It belongs on a pizza just like any pizza topping. Those who hate it are being childish. When the restaurant was empty I was thinking of Kitchen Nightmares. Where Gordon Ramsay would have to visit. Of course the pizza place would be like it was once and wouldn't fail. For he just lost his way and can find his spark. Like he did once Nick came. John did deserve that visit people or their case mammals that you like. I can understand why Maurizio like that. If you have no income well it's the streets for you. That happens and I know how it feels haha. Have to upload the next chapter FTB. Take all the time you need. Well that's good and I'm happy when I work on my stories. I'm sure they can figured something out to save their business. Base of what Maurizio said that would be difficult. For they spent years not making little money. Those it would be nice to see it doesn't work so that they have to learn not everything works out in the way you want it too. That you can try your hardest but still fail. The end doesn't have to be the end but a new beginning. I can't wait to see how it works out. |
Dracoessa Draga chapter 16 . 6/14 oh Fauq! |
imjustlikehumphery chapter 16 . 6/14 Great chapter dizzie, keep it up! After havin some really good pizza findin out the money issues of the place and findin out that John used to work here was more than enough for Nick and his friends to get John to wanna help out the place he used to work at as a pup. Although now to hear that his old boss ended up sellin the place puts everyone's efforts to waste especially if it was to that ram that kept botherin Camillia and her father. Can't wait for the next chapter! |
J Shute chapter 16 . 6/14 What do they do now indeed! A fun chapter, nice to see this happy fic return. As always, the bantering going on was great fun. Awesome job! |
Pedroxmv97 chapter 16 . 6/13 IT LIIIIIIIVES! |