| Reviews for Spider-Man: The Young Avenger |
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joe63129 chapter 1 . 2/1 Great story. PLEASE UPDATE |
Heroman95 chapter 11 . 11/21/2019 The highlight of this chapter was seeing Spider-Man insult the fat man of crime. Plus, it was a cool fight scene; adding Ant-Man to the mix was a nice touch. It's always nice to see the romance between Cassie and Peter. Good job. STAY AWESOME! |
Wall chapter 11 . 8/16/2019 Starkiller don't pay attention to those reviewers who keep on asking you about any of your stories I'm actually impressed that you're able to come buying different genres and write good stories. Like I would have never thought of mashing together the world of Sabrina the teenage witch with Danny phantom. I grew up watching Sabrina the teenage witch with Melissa Joan Hart and I've seen the newest series chilling adventures of Sabrina as well as I found the old cartoon on YouTube. Archie and Sabrina hour was the cartoon series during the 1960's and I it was all Sabrina use a wand if she can use the one in the actual comics that's cool are you really haven't really read any of her comics. And I like the fact that Salem can talk. and if you get to the point in your Danny phantom and Sabrina story with Danny finding his future self pick another reviewer out onto please have a future version of Sabrina Bean enough with them to the training interesting if they defeated their future selves together |
Guest chapter 11 . 8/12/2019 I understand. Just take it easy on the writing |
cornholio4 chapter 11 . 8/11/2019 Hopefully Fisk can’t bury it all like in the Ultimate comcis when he gets back |
Ultimatrix bearer chapter 11 . 8/11/2019 Hah one at a time. Good one! KEEP BEING AWESOME! |
PHL360 chapter 11 . 8/11/2019 without Kingdom you will use Mister Negative and his Gang |
The Big Papa chapter 1 . 5/16/2019 Keep up the good work and updates |
Heroman95 chapter 10 . 5/1/2019 I really like how you're mixing the MCU together with the comics for this story. And as far as character interactions go; I think that the pet names that Peter and Cassie called each other were very cute. I know I've probably said it before but I love them as a couple. When Peter and Scott were having their heart to heart about their past mistakes, it felt like they were having a real bonding moment, like they both knew where each other were coming from. And I think it's cool that both Scott and Luis are going to help him take down the fat man himself. Although in my personal opinion, it's weird how Peter just calls him Scott instead of Mr. Lang; because he's older than him and he's his girlfriend's father, so it feels like he should at least maintain some level of respect or decorum, plus I don't think that he knows him well enough to call him by his first name. I also enjoyed how you made Peter a big fanboy of Hank Pym in this story. There have been times in both the comics and cartoons where Peter has mentioned that he was a fan of scientists such as Charles Xavier, Max Modell, Tony Stark, and maybe even Reed Richards; but I have never once heard him say that he was a fan of Hank Pym. And I think that's because he was never a big name in the scientific community; he was always small time compared to the likes of Iron Man or Mister Fantastic, pun intended. So it was fun to see Peter and Hank talk shop. Your story's getting really good, keep up the good work. STAY AWESOME! |
Jason Kreuger Myers chapter 10 . 4/22/2019 AWESOME! Personally though, screw her Mom. It's CASSIE'S life, not her's, and if she doesn't want her daughter to be a hero like her father, that's her problem |
warlocktoungue chapter 10 . 4/22/2019 nothing better for a bonding time between you and your father in law than fighting a crime lord... ;D |
Ultimatrix bearer chapter 10 . 4/22/2019 Hooray for Luis! KEEP BEING AWESOME! |
CRUDEN chapter 10 . 4/21/2019 Awesome glad to see you up and running again |
pyrojack25 chapter 10 . 4/21/2019 I love Luis, mainly his whacky stories. I finally found a way to read Ultimate Spider-Man, so I'll shut up about for the sake of any new guys. The web gear thing, okay, noted. Just curious about it than annoyed. |
cornholio4 chapter 10 . 4/20/2019 I love luis, so hopefully Fisk stays in prison when he is caught |