Is this really it? Does anyone know if this is legitimately the last chapter?

Ok, I just want to ask this.

While I was reading this I was wondering.

Why hasn't Lincoln notice that this was Lisa doing the moment he enters his house and saw the stated his sisters?

He's not dumb.

I mean if I didn't read the previous story I would automatically assume Lisa since she loves doing experiments on her siblings.

But the moment Leni call Lincoln 'my child' that when I would say, ok Lisa is behind this somehow.

Let's nail the fact that everyone other then Lincoln, Liliy,(not counting Lynn Jr since she was still locked up at the time) and Lisa weren't wearing gloves at the dinner table. That's a major red flag right there.

Maybe it would lessen the impact of the story, or it would be over real quick, but that still bugs me.

It's already going to be 2020 and STILL no update. Man I really hope this story isn't dead. This sucks :(

Pls pls finish I love this stories but I can never get around to finish can you continue

Well... this is a good bye :(

bien lei todo y todo se fue a la caca en este fic apenas si mencionaron a los medicos y los hacian sufrir por cosas que nadie manda como el corazon aislandolos a cada uno asi termino esto aqui nadie esta haciendolo bien excepto quizas lily

ronniecoln forced, when ronnie started all this crap worse than lynn

Amazing as ever CaptainDarko. The story is a great sequel that could probably rival the prequel. Can hardly wait what's next!

I'm just asking! What about those other stories? If you can give a reason why you can't, (or won't, you don't have to be specific on 'can't' or 'won't') or if you don't want to give a reason that's alright, just let us know if ya are or not, or just dump them or it on us like a surprise. They are... really fucking good.

Nice. Hoping things end nice. It’s getting real intense. And that spicy Luna Lincoln kiss. Keep it up man.

Jesus Christ... my reaction to this chapter, besides some grammar issues, this was pretty good.

Holy Shit... my reaction to you re-uploading these stories. I didn't expect you to ever come back, thought you had retired. I am glad to see you're back, mate.

I like this chapter, but I think you need a beta/editor. some parts didn't make sense and were written weirdly.

I wonder if you still have When It All Falls Down?

What happened to you? Your stories were gone.

I didn't even know this story was remove and just thought it was a long hiatus but glad to see it back. Luan should just let it out what she has got to say about what is really going on in that house or else others will die. Lincoln going all Joker and twitchy like that makes me pray that he gets his medicine fast to restore his sane mind.