i read the original story when it first came it and this concept had me hooked. you did an amazing job picking up the story, keep up the great job. it would be awesome to see this turned into a multiple chapter story.

Pls can you see if we can have the original posted. Miss that story so much xD

can you ask if he can repost his story so we can read it

wonder if they will have babies... hehe

Do you happen to know why the original was deleted? It's one of my all-time favorites and I'd love to read it again...

Sangheilitat117's White Dragon of the North was an awesome story, but it never gave us any closure (as you mention in the story it talked a little about Ruby trying to take over the world or something.) I think this is a really nice and sweet epilogue to the story. It is a shame that it was removed, but at least you have made something that we can look back on and remember.

Amazing work!

Every once in a while, I read something that legitimately freaks me the fuck out, and sometimes I’ll even end up losing sleep over it. The original was one of those, and frankly I’m glad it was deleted, with him quitting writing here.

Having said that, it looks like you managed to keep a lot of the kinkiness, while replacing the disturbing shit with cute shit. Hell, if I pretend this is a standalone piece, it’s probably one of your best. So, good job!

OMG! I remember that fic! It was amazing and shame that was deleted... but now you give us this!
Great work, looking forward for more
Saludos!

This makes me want to read that story or something like it either way this was a good read