I just this read this in an entire day which I would not recommend, but it was so good that I just couldn't stop reading. It was very good and definitely worth rereading.
Some of my favorite things:
Your characterization was phenomenonal. All the characters were very distinct and really well thought out an portrayed. Aylee gave me scatter-brain professor vibes at the beginning which I really loved, but she was also a really well rounded OC. I was so fascinated by how you expanded on Obi Wan's dilemma with the Jedi Order and how it contrasted with the old code, and how he connected failure and worthiness to both I think it would be interesting to see how that same mindsight followed him into the Clone Wars and even after. I really loved Tir-Zen, and how you portrayed his character through his interactions with the characters like how he always had caf ready for him master or how always kept an eye on Anakin. Also I loved Anakin. I just wanted to squish and protect him in every scene he appeared in because he was just so precious.
Also I loved how you utilized the different species and worlds. They were all so memorable and distinct. It was one of the strongest parts of the story.
Then the story was very well thought out. I loved how the beginning arcs were somewhat episodic, but then they all connected in the end. It was very satisfying.
Then the language that you used was so lovely. They way you conveyed the force and the sensation of using the force was really creative, and touched me right in the feels. There were so many poignant scenes that I had to reread because they were so beautiful and well written.
Hope I didn't ramble too much, but suffice to say I really enjoyed this story. Well done

all the Situations with there size differnce are funny i like it

That's it? Really?

I've read story from the very beginning. I even added it as a favorite. I must say, I am extremely disappointed in the ending. It seemed very rushed, and honestly a cop out. I expected better, if I am brutally honest. It felt like you just didn't want to write the story anymore.

I've been hooked since the first chapter. Such a good read. The characterizations are perfect. Love this so much

This is really good! Please keep updating... I'm addicted now.

I'm just goin to mention that my philosophy on the force is now following the way of the River. Go Team Grey! Grey Revan was always the Best Revan!

Also BTW this whole story so far 12.5/10

Love lead to the light side

It's true, the Force guides and you need to heed its flow. Whatever is happening, it's leading these two Masters and Padawans on a definite path.

For a few moments, I suspect that Obi-Wan and Aylee did something no Force sensitive has done since the time of legend and were literally ONE with the Force, conduits through which the infinite power of life and creation flowed and was shaped. Not Dark or Light but simple Force.

I think the Council realised that to resist such a thing would be simply to add a new enemy to an ever-growing list.

It's really simple Obi-Wan. The reason why someone, whoever they were, would erase something like that would be because someone didn't want it known that such a thing was possible.

The 'who' doesn't matter; they are likely all long dead and possibly only Yoda would know them as vague references to 'my Master's Master's Master' from fellow Padawans. The question is how many instructions did they leave and just how far is the current Council willing to go to uphold their secret strictures and mysteries?

At some point, Aylee HAS to accept the guidance of the Force is behind all of this.

In any case, a group of slavers operating Coruscant has been stopped, which should be a nice feather in the Council's cap and something that they can use to remind the Senate why they are needed. So, there should be no repercussions to Aylee's unauthorised mission but, even if there are, one must ask why.

Qui-Gon believed that the Force was what a Jedi obeyed, not the passing, firefly-like existence of various councils. In that, of course, he was only expressing a truth so self-evident that it is surprising that it was even controversial.

For a while, the rule of Darth Revan was the basis of the Jedi; once there were families; once a cult that, in its mysticism, tried to make a religion out of the flow of the Force through the living body and a rite out of the act of coupling. Through all of this, the one constant has been The Force and the attempt to understand how it guides and directs all things.

With an Order that is tens of thousands of years old and made up of very, very fallible beings, it is very unlikely that it has been constant and static.

Oh, come now, Masters Jedi. "I just followed by feet?" That's lame. "I followed the guidance of the Force" is a far more accurate way to put it.

The bas-reliefs both have the feel of a Hindu sacred sculpture. The first clearly showed chakra points, supposedly focus points of the ki, the life-force and the second...? Well, many ancient religions revered the sex act for its intimacy and the fact that it, alone of all human activities, could create life from seemingly nothing. It isn't unreasonable that, at some point, a Je'dai sect could have explored the same ideas in their attempt to understand the Force.

Im loving this story
your OC's are believable and compelling !
please keep it up !